Angels

Rarely seen for real Such paragon of virtue A divine envoy Embodying flesh A heavenly messenger Ever guiding star Yet they forgather Like a quotidian mortal Blending joyfully Date created: 04/08/16 An entry to "Angel (Senryu)" contest Sponsor: Marvin Celestial 3rd placer

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Walter T. Ashe

Date: 4/23/2016 11:33:00 AM

First congrats on this entry that won! This Senryu poem will be an example for me! Thank you for your visit!

Moon Flower
Date: 9/5/2017 11:41:00 AM

Sorry for the late reply but you're much appreciated. :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/13/2016 11:22:00 AM

And so we read it in pink delight... Congratulations for your success...

Moon Flower
Date: 4/13/2016 7:47:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/12/2016 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations Moon Flower

Moon Flower
Date: 4/13/2016 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/12/2016 5:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Moon :)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/13/2016 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2016 4:51:00 PM

I'm pleased to be back with congratulations, Moon Flower:) Well done! // paul

Moon Flower
Date: 4/13/2016 7:44:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/12/2016 12:21:00 PM

Beautiful thoughts, wonderful win. Congratulations Moon Flower...

Moon Flower
Date: 4/12/2016 12:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie. :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/12/2016 11:10:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Moon Flower
Date: 4/12/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, BL. :)

Lu Loo

Date: 4/12/2016 8:31:00 AM

Moon Flower, just beautiful..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo.

Moon Flower
Date: 4/12/2016 12:00:00 PM

Hi Luloo. Yours is simply the best. :) Thank you so much.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/12/2016 7:43:00 AM

Congrats for your WIN, with this beautiful piece Moon Flower!!! ;-)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/12/2016 11:52:00 AM

Thank you so much, Teddy. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 1:00:00 AM

Moon Flower, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA

Moon Flower
Date: 4/12/2016 1:58:00 AM

Much appreciated, Linda. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2016 1:39:00 PM

I like your take on the angel topic, Moon Flower. Humans and angels interact with one another, and they do seem to blend so well together. ~ Regards // paul

Moon Flower
Date: 4/9/2016 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Paul!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/8/2016 12:26:00 PM

- A beautiful angel poem, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower
Date: 4/9/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Anne. Hugs!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2016 10:25:00 AM

Very lovely...

Moon Flower
Date: 4/9/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Tim!