Angelina

In 1965, I was enlisted, 
To serve in the battle at Vietnam
For ten senseless years, I fought 
Until the fall of Saigon
 
A medic, my trade, 
In battle- I'd nurse 
All the wounded soldiers... 
The war would disperse
 
One day in the field, 
While helping the wounded 
I found a Vietnamese woman, 
Bloodied, crying...and severely injured
 
A sever on her forehead 
'Bout three inches wide 
And a bullet hole puncture 
That had torn through her side
 
She was left for dead, 
by those with no vain 
No more could I watch 
that poor woman in pain
 
Draped over my back, 
I trekked half a mile 
Talking other languages 
we spoke all the while
 
Until I got her to a hospital 
across the enemy lines 
Narrowly missing... 
Those enemy mines
 
Ten days she spent 
in the hospitals there 
Until they were able to transport her 
To a room, of my care

For six long months more 
I'd stay with the troops 
Bunkered down like chickens 
cuddled in coops
 
But every day, I checked...
On that Vietnamese woman 
To see if she was still alive 
And to see how she was doing
 
As days passed by, 
We became close in heart 
So close, that nothing... 
Could separate us apart
 
That wounded Vietnamese woman 
Became part of my life 
My sweet Angelina, 
Is now my dear wife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kingston Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 10:01 PM
This was so profound and powerful. I'm in tears and the neice of a double amputee who fought in Viet Nam, throwing a gernade out of a fox hole to save his troups. Did Angelina really become your wife? I hope it's true, I read it was fictional below. :( The last stanza was beautiful. The ending was so dear, I'm so glad to have found this one.
Bowring Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:31 PM
This is a wonderful story Charlie and so realistically written as shown by us all wondering fact or fiction? A great testament to your wonderful storytelling skills. Love the title - the heroine’s name. The story unfolds smoothly with great rhyming. A captivating read from start to finish and yes, I always love a love story with a happy ending :) Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings :)
Messina Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:06 PM
Hey there Christina, thanks so much for your lovely and uplifting comments. Thank you also, for your blessings. I believe love stories like this do exist...so many good souls amongst us. Blessings to you too...your support is much appreciated. Hugs Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Read this is fiction but you wrote so realistically! Good one!
Messina Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, Kim :)
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Charlie, what a wonderful love story and story of survival, is this fact or fiction?
Messina Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Hi Tania, thank you! This is fictional in my life...but I do believe this very well could be fact upon someone else's :) Don't ya just love, love stories like this :)
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