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Angelina

In 1965, I was enlisted, To serve in the battle at Vietnam For ten senseless years, I fought Until the fall of Saigon A medic, my trade, In battle- I'd nurse All the wounded soldiers... The war would disperse One day in the field, While helping the wounded I found a Vietnamese woman, Bloodied, crying...and severely injured A sever on her forehead 'Bout three inches wide And a bullet hole puncture That had torn through her side She was left for dead, by those with no vain No more could I watch that poor woman in pain Draped over my back, I trekked half a mile Talking other languages we spoke all the while Until I got her to a hospital across the enemy lines Narrowly missing... Those enemy mines Ten days she spent in the hospitals there Until they were able to transport her To a room, of my care For six long months more I'd stay with the troops Bunkered down like chickens cuddled in coops But every day, I checked... On that Vietnamese woman To see if she was still alive And to see how she was doing As days passed by, We became close in heart So close, that nothing... Could separate us apart That wounded Vietnamese woman Became part of my life My sweet Angelina, Is now my dear wife

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Date: 3/29/2024 10:01:00 PM
This was so profound and powerful. I'm in tears and the neice of a double amputee who fought in Viet Nam, throwing a gernade out of a fox hole to save his troups. Did Angelina really become your wife? I hope it's true, I read it was fictional below. :( The last stanza was beautiful. The ending was so dear, I'm so glad to have found this one.
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Date: 1/17/2024 12:31:00 PM
This is a wonderful story Charlie and so realistically written as shown by us all wondering fact or fiction? A great testament to your wonderful storytelling skills. Love the title - the heroine’s name. The story unfolds smoothly with great rhyming. A captivating read from start to finish and yes, I always love a love story with a happy ending :) Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/17/2024 7:06:00 PM
Hey there Christina, thanks so much for your lovely and uplifting comments. Thank you also, for your blessings. I believe love stories like this do exist...so many good souls amongst us. Blessings to you too...your support is much appreciated. Hugs Charlie
Date: 1/15/2024 4:31:00 PM
is this fictional or real? I guess it doesn't matter. The story you told is compelling with a sweet ending. I enjoyed the read. Have a great evening, Sara
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/15/2024 4:52:00 PM
LOL- This is fictional. Thank you so much, Sara! Charlie
Date: 1/15/2024 12:40:00 PM
Read this is fiction but you wrote so realistically! Good one!
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/15/2024 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 1/15/2024 12:04:00 PM
Charlie, what a wonderful love story and story of survival, is this fact or fiction?
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/15/2024 12:22:00 PM
Hi Tania, thank you! This is fictional in my life...but I do believe this very well could be fact upon someone else's :) Don't ya just love, love stories like this :)

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