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Angelica

Angelica curiously peering over a cloud Angelica stepped a bit too far wings fluttered and disappeared stolen by jealous demons below angel flying too close to the ground leaving the harmony of heaven sensing a need to save a ravaged planet landing gracefully on soft soil Angelica hears the bulldozers weapons of environmental destruction sauntering through Earth’s rainforests curiosity beckons as water reflects her image her lost wings still reflect in the pond seen as ripples from her pink, silk gown orchid floral tiara crowns her long auburn hair even water lilies envy her beauty captivated by this pool lit with filtered sun immersed in an image of herself in God’s light all angels appear the same bright beams to welcome new souls fly again she will bubbles of hope spring forth Earthbound for but a brief time cherished cherub sent as nature’s guardian halo of comfort surrounds Angelica leans forth to feel the coolness sparkling water caresses warm lips her kiss renews Earth’s freshness other angels transparent in sunlight bestow a new set of wings mission accomplished, they escort her home once again she revels in heaven’s light For the “Reflection” contest, sponsored by Constance La France ~ a Rambling Poet ~ By Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2011 2:08:00 PM
As I said, "destined"! Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Carolyn. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/2/2011 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest with this gem....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:35:00 PM
congratulations, carolyn, on your win. sorry it took me so long to realize it! Just now seeing all the lovely winners.LUv,andrea
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:35:00 PM
Hey again Carolyn, congratulations on your win in the contest, love Wilma
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:22:00 AM
SOUP MAIL! :)
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:43:00 AM
congradulations on your win. john
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:02:00 AM
Awesome Job Carolyn, this is so beautiful. Good to see you in the top 10 gracious lady. Congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:21:00 AM
Make a real story out of this idea..you could write another book! I miss you..hope all is well ..I know you have alot going on. congrats once again to my LNC. BG
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:51:00 AM
Where are you, Carolyn? I hope you're alright. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:03:00 PM
great win here Carolyn, so pleased to see a positive result for you, all the best Joe.
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:06:00 PM
beautiful dear friend. So many wonderful images. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:07:00 PM
A gem of a poem!Congrats Carolyn on your win in the contest---kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:32:00 PM
i am so taken by this lovely piece, carols.. thumbs up for your great win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:14:00 PM
Another win for you, Carolyn. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2011 2:25:00 PM
One destined for the Winners' List" Carolyn. Truly beautiful imagery with depth of content to match. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/25/2011 2:45:00 AM
First place write Carolyn, you touched base with every aspect of the picture shown and worded it so elegantly. As always I greatly enjoy your work , good luck with the contest. Luv ~Virginia ps. Thank you for your kind comments :)
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Date: 2/25/2011 1:00:00 AM
What a pretty write Carolyn, so delicate and charming in its presence... Glad I dropped by today. Laptop now working of sorts still some small probs... Facebook working but nuisance at times, and yes my account sabbotaged too! Miss your presence over there though as have so many contacts on there for different reasons too... Hope all is well. Keep your pen dancing. Hugs x
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Date: 2/23/2011 6:10:00 AM
beautiful work, thanks for your comments on my silly puppy poem.
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:39:00 PM
many thanks for your great comments Carolyn and how is Daniel? i have been hoping for his better health.
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:36:00 PM
Such a beautiful reflection at that my dear poetic friend...how I missed your writes ! Awesome dear Carolyn ! much love, james
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:38:00 PM
What a great inspiraton for all to read
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:13:00 PM
Lovely poem, Carolyn. Even the display is nice. The two lines I like best are: "orchid floral tiara crowns her long auburn hair" " even water lilies envy her beauty" Good luck in the contest.
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