Carolyn Devonshire Poet Free verse

Angelica

Angelica

curiously peering over a cloud
   Angelica stepped a bit too far
      wings fluttered and disappeared
         stolen by jealous demons below 

angel flying too close to the ground
   leaving the harmony of heaven
      sensing a need to save a ravaged planet
         landing gracefully on soft soil
 
Angelica hears the bulldozers
   weapons of environmental destruction
      sauntering through Earth’s rainforests
         curiosity beckons as water reflects her image

her lost wings still reflect in the pond
   seen as ripples from her pink, silk gown
      orchid floral tiara crowns her long auburn hair
         even water lilies envy her beauty

captivated by this pool lit with filtered sun
   immersed in an image of herself
      in God’s light all angels appear the same
         bright beams to welcome new souls

fly again she will
   bubbles of hope spring forth
      Earthbound for but a brief time
         cherished cherub sent as nature’s guardian

halo of comfort surrounds
   Angelica leans forth to feel the coolness
      sparkling water caresses warm lips
         her kiss renews Earth’s freshness

other angels transparent in sunlight
   bestow a new set of wings
      mission accomplished, they escort her home
         once again she revels in heaven’s light


For the “Reflection” contest, sponsored by Constance La France ~ a Rambling Poet ~
By Carolyn Devonshire

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Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 2:08 PM As I said, "destined"! Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Carolyn. Love, Annalise

James Fraser March 2, 2011 at 12:00 PM Congratulations Carolyn on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest with this gem....:)

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2011 at 1:35 PM congratulations, carolyn, on your win. sorry it took me so long to realize it! Just now seeing all the lovely winners.LUv,andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 8:07 AM Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels February 27, 2011 at 1:35 PM Hey again Carolyn, congratulations on your win in the contest, love Wilma

Nette Onclaud February 27, 2011 at 9:22 AM SOUP MAIL! :)

Sara Kendrick February 26, 2011 at 4:44 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Loving Iii February 26, 2011 at 8:43 AM congradulations on your win. john

John Freeman February 26, 2011 at 8:02 AM Awesome Job Carolyn, this is so beautiful. Good to see you in the top 10 gracious lady. Congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick February 26, 2011 at 6:21 AM Make a real story out of this idea..you could write another book! I miss you..hope all is well ..I know you have alot going on. congrats once again to my LNC. BG

Daver Austin February 26, 2011 at 4:51 AM Where are you, Carolyn? I hope you're alright. Love, Dave

Joe Maverick February 25, 2011 at 11:03 PM great win here Carolyn, so pleased to see a positive result for you, all the best Joe.

Tahera Mannan February 25, 2011 at 8:06 PM beautiful dear friend. So many wonderful images. Many congratulations for this big win.

Kash Poet February 25, 2011 at 7:07 PM A gem of a poem!Congrats Carolyn on your win in the contest---kashinath

Nette Onclaud February 25, 2011 at 6:32 PM i am so taken by this lovely piece, carols.. thumbs up for your great win! :) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit February 25, 2011 at 6:14 PM Another win for you, Carolyn. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta February 25, 2011 at 5:51 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Carolyn

Audrey Haick February 25, 2011 at 2:25 PM One destined for the Winners' List" Carolyn. Truly beautiful imagery with depth of content to match. Love, Annalise

Virginia Frayer February 25, 2011 at 2:45 AM First place write Carolyn, you touched base with every aspect of the picture shown and worded it so elegantly. As always I greatly enjoy your work , good luck with the contest. Luv ~Virginia ps. Thank you for your kind comments :)

Anna-Marie Docherty February 25, 2011 at 1:00 AM What a pretty write Carolyn, so delicate and charming in its presence... Glad I dropped by today. Laptop now working of sorts still some small probs... Facebook working but nuisance at times, and yes my account sabbotaged too! Miss your presence over there though as have so many contacts on there for different reasons too... Hope all is well. Keep your pen dancing. Hugs x

Doris Culverhouse February 23, 2011 at 6:10 AM beautiful work, thanks for your comments on my silly puppy poem.

Joe Maverick February 22, 2011 at 11:39 PM many thanks for your great comments Carolyn and how is Daniel? i have been hoping for his better health.

James Peranteau February 22, 2011 at 6:36 PM Such a beautiful reflection at that my dear poetic friend...how I missed your writes ! Awesome dear Carolyn ! much love, james

Stephan McBride February 22, 2011 at 5:38 PM What a great inspiraton for all to read

James Tate February 22, 2011 at 12:13 PM Lovely poem, Carolyn. Even the display is nice. The two lines I like best are: "orchid floral tiara crowns her long auburn hair" " even water lilies envy her beauty" Good luck in the contest.

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