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Although autumnal fest Slowly vanishes with ripped blooms -- My child above appears upon my request His veiled presence consumes This endless yearning to grasp his seraphic air. How rain of Fall taps…dim as time’s crumpled prayer Yet we bathe in reveries fair , Until winds shroud him… ripped again I am nowhere; For my dear firstborn is life's everything Called to be our guardian, our blest wing. ------- Re-post /97/2019 John Hamilton's NA rerun 2 Contest ------------- Written for Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Judged 7/9/2019 12:00:0 AM

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Date: 8/10/2019 6:42:00 PM
A different offering from you this time Nette, congrats on placing this time!
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Date: 6/23/2019 9:18:00 PM
Your poetry is so beautiful, Nette, a favorite to my list. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/23/2019 8:17:00 AM
Dear Nette, another word treat. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/23/2019 5:21:00 AM
Poetically captivating...sad yet beautiful. You have executed this contest challenge with a most able pen, Nette. Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/23/2019 3:37:00 AM
Your poetic pen is aflame again nette, beautiful verse. Tom.
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Date: 6/22/2019 12:04:00 PM
Amazing poem Nette! Very well done. I look forward to reading your beautiful poems :)
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Date: 6/22/2019 7:57:00 AM
Awesome poem, nette. Beautiful and poignant.
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Date: 6/22/2019 5:38:00 AM
Your crumbling rises nette...very well crafted my friend...BOL...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 6/22/2019 3:52:00 AM
memories... of pain and joy...All rgw best nette
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Date: 6/22/2019 2:02:00 AM
This poem takes me back many, many years Nette- I love this poem and the picture brought tears to my eyes as I visualized my baby I lost at 4 days old! Hugs, Jennifer.
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