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For Angelic Or Abandoned Words Poetry Contest of Constance La France

Angelic

"On the day that you were born the angels got together and decided to create a dream come true " lyrics by Burt Bacharach for Carpenters' "Close to You" Angelic was my love – a vision! He made me develop something maybe close to tunnelvision for him, a heavenly young thing! I swear rapture was in his eyes. Angelic was my love – a vision. Radiant was he as sunrise. Perfection needs no revision. Day one there was a collision - chemistry we could not deny. Angelic was my love – a vision. On wings of bliss I learned to fly. Kisses and caresses sublime. It was not a hard decision to give to him all my sweet time. Angelic was my love – a vision!
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La France Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Andrea, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote, Constance
Kaur Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 2:14 AM
Wonderfully written!
Peck Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 7:45 AM
A beautiful poem, Andrea. I love your line "perfection needs no revision."
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:33 AM
- Congratulations on this lovely Angelic poem, Andrea :) - hugs
Sharma  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 11:47 PM
Awwn, such w beautiful and vibrant piece this is.. So beautifully woven with absolutely gorgeous and heavenly vibes, congratulations on the win, dear! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I also love the song. Have a great day.............
Dutta Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Big Congrats to win. Special admiration for a poet , always Topper.
Downing  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:59 PM
It really is splendid write, Andrea. Good luck in the contest :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:07 PM
Andrea, this is a skillfully written, vividly descriptive romantic piece. Janice
DiMino Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Delightful, very romantic write! The Carpenters were an excellent group indeed. Best of luck in contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Fantastic poem, Andrea.
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 4:39 PM
Splendidly reminiscing in memories, Andrea. He certainly captured your heart and mind. Lovely poem.
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