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For Angelic Or Abandoned Words Poetry Contest of Constance La France

"On the day that you were born the angels got together and decided to create a dream come true " lyrics by Burt Bacharach for Carpenters' "Close to You" Angelic was my love – a vision! He made me develop something maybe close to tunnelvision for him, a heavenly young thing! I swear rapture was in his eyes. Angelic was my love – a vision. Radiant was he as sunrise. Perfection needs no revision. Day one there was a collision - chemistry we could not deny. Angelic was my love – a vision. On wings of bliss I learned to fly. Kisses and caresses sublime. It was not a hard decision to give to him all my sweet time. Angelic was my love – a vision!

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Date: 9/12/2023 5:23:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote, Constance
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Date: 9/6/2023 2:14:00 AM
Wonderfully written!
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Date: 8/24/2023 7:45:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Andrea. I love your line "perfection needs no revision."
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Date: 8/23/2023 10:33:00 AM
- Congratulations on this lovely Angelic poem, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 8/22/2023 11:47:00 PM
Awwn, such w beautiful and vibrant piece this is.. So beautifully woven with absolutely gorgeous and heavenly vibes, congratulations on the win, dear! :)
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Date: 8/22/2023 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I also love the song. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/21/2023 9:44:00 PM
Big Congrats to win. Special admiration for a poet , always Topper.
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Date: 8/21/2023 6:59:00 PM
It really is splendid write, Andrea. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/21/2023 6:07:00 PM
Andrea, this is a skillfully written, vividly descriptive romantic piece. Janice
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Date: 8/21/2023 2:22:00 PM
Delightful, very romantic write! The Carpenters were an excellent group indeed. Best of luck in contest.
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Date: 8/21/2023 12:17:00 PM
Fantastic poem, Andrea.
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Date: 8/20/2023 4:39:00 PM
Splendidly reminiscing in memories, Andrea. He certainly captured your heart and mind. Lovely poem.
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