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August.20.2023
Angelic or Abandoned Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France

Angelic

“Stealing our breath, you came down to us with angelic grace and you keep holding us under your magic spell” ~ By Poet

A precious little angel is born to us. Our first grandchild, a bundle of joy, Sent down from heaven, a blessing! One look at her cherubic face Made our hearts race in joy. She looked at me with wide open eyes, As if affirming a bond long established. As if telling me, “Grandma, I am by your side, To fulfil your yearning for a daughter To fill the vacuum, you have long been feeling”. With wonder and joy, we gazed at her angelic face, - her tiny hands with long tapering fingers, - her tender feet with cute little nails, and her parted little lips that quivered to tell a tale. Baby, you are fresh like the morning dew, Beautiful like a fairy, And fragrant like an opening flower. You push your way like light seeping through, Into our hearts and thoughts, day in and out! Sweet one, we cuddle and hold you, Close to our heart and thoughts, And entreat God the Almighty to take care of you, To bring pride and hope to your dad and Mom, And hold the hands of your aged grandparents!
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La France Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:35 PM
Valsa, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image and quote, Constance
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:53 AM
- What wonderful happiness ... really Angelic, Valsa - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line "A precious little angel is born to us." I enjoyed your wonderful write/quote/cute picture. Have a great day.............
Poet Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:53 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your top contest win, with this so lovely poem, Valsa
Seeker Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Straight from the heart! It is truly a blessing, warmest congratulations dear Valsa
McBride  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations, on your grandchild, this is a beautiful dedication and grandchild, the excitement can be felt through your words, truly a blessing to read and I am so excited for you all: )
DiMino Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 12:13 PM
"With wonder and joy, we gazed at her angelic face, - her tiny hands with long tapering fingers, - her tender feet with cute little nails, and her parted little lips that quivered to tell a tale." Soooo outstanding!! Lovely poem! Best of luck in contest.
Empress Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:51 AM
This made my heart beam, and tear up, that love, and the first touch and connection with our children be it grandchild or otherwise is so precious and worth celebrating, and the way you’ve described that is so beautiful and so heartwarming! Congratulations and wishing your grandchild a happy healthy life ahead. You’ve expressed is sheer eloquence
George Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Yes, it is an occasion worth celebrating... the arrival of an angel into our midst. We can keep looking at her for any length of time. Indeed a precious gift received with gratitude. Thanks a lot Empress for your lovely response. Glad you visited my page.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Firsts are especially fun! Four years after my first, I heard the Lord ask me, “Could you love another grandchild as much as you love your first?” I answered yes! The next day I found out my daughter was pregnant with my second granddaughter. How cool is that! Love: Baby, you are fresh like the morning dew, Beautiful like a fairy, And fragrant like an opening flower. Lovely sentiments! Congratulations!
George Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:19 AM
That is something of a rare coincidence or perhaps a miracle. God knew your thoughts and felt that you would welcome one more grand child as you had done the first time. When we trust Him completely miracles happen. Thank you so much dear KIm.
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 5:58 AM
With eloquent prose and a meticulously curated vocabulary, Valsa, your writing truly exudes a profound essence. This exquisite composition effortlessly incorporates a plethora of exquisite metaphors and enthralling linguistic selections. Its sheer magnificence is truly awe-inspiring. Allow me to extend my heartfelt congratulations on the arrival of your grandchild. Undoubtedly, your heart must overflow with an abundance of love for this precious addition. Ah, such a tender sentiment! This work is destined to enchant and deeply resonate with a vast spectrum of readers.
George Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:11 AM
I am flabbergasted by your comment. I don't deserve so much. My poem is not that poetic, but the emotions expressed are genuine. We were elevated to a different plane seeing her face. A grandchild can alter out lives, perhaps more than our own children. I am sure this is how most of the grandparents feel including you. Thanks a lot dear friend for your appreciation.
Sharma  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Oh how magical and breathtaking, such a blessing has arrived as a token of pure fairy sparkles! She's definitely the cutest and these descriptions in your splendid words truly convey to us, that your heart is filled with so much love for her.. Ahh, just so heartwarming! "Her parted little lips that quivered to tell a tale" She's a beautiful fairytale herself! :)
George Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Thanks a lot Hiya for your lovely comment ! Indeed it is a joy unmatched. Welcome to Poetry Soup
Volumes Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Oh Valsa CONGRATULATIONS !! This is pure love ! I cant stop smiling so pleased for you. You have been blessed with an amazing gift. She wont stop pleasing you for even a second. She will keep your heart overflowing with pride and adoration. When you think of her, your poems will have a special twinkle from now on. A favourite . It better be POTD !! I am sure everyone will agree.
George Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 5:10 AM
A new feeling has taken over me.... I cannot say if it is excitement or euphoria ! Life has come to a new turn. Thank you dear friend for joining in my joy. Thanks also for your sweet comment.
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