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Angel With An Umbrella

Encumbered with the walker blankets for the wet bench, sheets of water splashing the cement. I ventured to my smoking spot face hidden inside my hooded coat. I light my fire stick, letting drops of water reverberate on my hood. My angel came walking by called my name; gave me her umbrella and kept on walking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 5:24:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/16/2011 3:40:00 PM
I like this a lot.
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:54:00 AM
great write gisele.Congrats on your poetry posted in home page
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Date: 9/12/2011 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gisele. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:24:00 AM
Dear Julie, thank you for enjoying my poem. Gisele
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Date: 1/15/2011 7:59:00 AM
very good imagery
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