Angel Visit

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Amber eyed angel, like a Greek goddess Nostradamus too could not have foretold Glowed in the night, luminous her bodice Effulgence sublime, aura flaming gold Locked her gaze with mine, beauteous yet bold Velvet soft her touch, bliss caress divine Intimate love throb caused nodes to align She left me then, as magnetism heightened Instant knowing beyond mind became mine Tryst with angel thus, left me enlightened 08-December-2021 (Acrostic Dizain) Disclaimer: Fictional account (Not for contest)

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/8/2021 9:44:00 PM

Hi Seeker, You have penned such a well written acrostic for the contest. You described it as a real account. Well done.Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/9/2021 3:33:00 AM

Well, it’s partly true and partly not, which is why I’m not entering it in the contest, even though I’ve given a disclaimer at the bottom of the poem.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/8/2021 4:39:00 PM

Very intriguing Acrostic, Unseeking Seeker. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/8/2021 6:06:00 PM

Combines Acrostic with Dizain … I enjoy doing this from time to time, as a challenge!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/8/2021 12:24:00 PM

So lovely Seeker - tender as God's love or an angel's touch. Love the concept of a "tryst" with an angel - God's messenger. A truly unforgettable experience. Sending you blessings. I would love to see you enter this in Constance's contest. I think it is a winner filled with grace. Blessings.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/8/2021 6:06:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! Happy you enjoyed! Edit: I originally wrote it for the contest, I confess but changed my mind later