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Angel Visit

Amber eyed angel, like a Greek goddess
Nostradamus too could not have foretold
Glowed in the night, luminous her bodice
Effulgence sublime, aura flaming gold
Locked her gaze with mine, beauteous yet bold

Velvet soft her touch, bliss caress divine
Intimate love throb caused nodes to align
She left me then, as magnetism heightened
Instant knowing beyond mind became mine
Tryst with angel thus, left me enlightened 

08-December-2021

(Acrostic Dizain)

Disclaimer: Fictional account

(Not for contest)
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December 8, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Hi Seeker, You have penned such a well written acrostic for the contest. You described it as a real account. Well done.Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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December 9, 2021 at 3:33 AM
Well, it’s partly true and partly not, which is why I’m not entering it in the contest, even though I’ve given a disclaimer at the bottom of the poem.
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December 8, 2021 at 4:39 PM
Very intriguing Acrostic, Unseeking Seeker. Bill
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December 8, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Combines Acrostic with Dizain … I enjoy doing this from time to time, as a challenge!
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December 8, 2021 at 12:24 PM
So lovely Seeker - tender as God's love or an angel's touch. Love the concept of a "tryst" with an angel - God's messenger. A truly unforgettable experience. Sending you blessings. I would love to see you enter this in Constance's contest. I think it is a winner filled with grace. Blessings.
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December 8, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Sam! Happy you enjoyed! Edit: I originally wrote it for the contest, I confess but changed my mind later
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