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Angel In the Amnion

In this dream I held a doll, yet an empty shell Your soul filled it with life; I felt the quickening The next week mom felt your tiny wings fluttering Unforeseen test results turned our heaven to hell A needle through her abdomen, wife's jaw gritted Tiny form bouncing on the screen, as if in play Needle entered your sanctum; you pushed it away Tiny hands, yet so deliberate—you hit it! When you say formless dread can sink into your bones Is it so crazy that my conscience becomes torn? Did we wound you deep even before you were born? Was it the needle violating your first home? 3/31/16 Iambic hexameter quatrains: abba cddc effe For contest: The Alphabet Contest, Letter A

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Date: 4/1/2016 5:38:00 AM
Tom i can feel your emotions so clearly through your verse...this is perhaps a conundrum which will never attain an answer...let it go my friend, leave it to the forces in the Universe of which you took no part.. much love, jill
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/1/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thx Jill. Unreasonable guilt? Probably. Doesn't always stop me...
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 4/1/2016 5:40:00 AM
Yay! I just read the bottom:)best of luck....peace, jill

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