Angel In the Amnion

In this dream I held a doll, yet an empty shell 
Your soul filled it with life; I felt the quickening
The next week mom felt your tiny wings fluttering 
Unforeseen test results turned our heaven to hell

A needle through her abdomen, wife's jaw gritted 
Tiny form bouncing on the screen, as if in play
Needle entered your sanctum; you pushed it away
Tiny hands, yet so deliberate—you hit it!

When you say formless dread can sink into your bones
Is it so crazy that my conscience becomes torn?
Did we wound you deep even before you were born?
Was it the needle violating your first home?

3/31/16
Iambic hexameter quatrains: abba cddc effe
For contest: The Alphabet Contest, Letter A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Spagnola Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Tom i can feel your emotions so clearly through your verse...this is perhaps a conundrum which will never attain an answer...let it go my friend, leave it to the forces in the Universe of which you took no part.. much love, jill
Quigley Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Thx Jill. Unreasonable guilt? Probably. Doesn't always stop me...
Spagnola Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 5:40 AM
Yay! I just read the bottom:)best of luck....peace, jill
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