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"~ To my guardian goddess ~
of strength and sacrifice ,
I am grateful to be born
every moment,
      in the poem of your love ,
  because there is no fondness
greater than you ,
that I will ever cherish ...
in any life and afterlife... "

this poem is a lil dedication to my mother, my hope, my strength... my lifeline

~ I love you mumma ~ 

 


 


 

 

angel de la rose

                                               s    t  a 
                   when the lapis                  r     s  
                        forget to stretch
              and tame me with honey twinkles,
                        to feel with love,
              and soak in the tears of my soul …
           she is the one, seamless with soothe,
              rising... like the selfless sun 
                  a    w    n          
            d       upon      i    n   g 
                    dreams 
               and letting me be 
          h e r   l i o n - l i l y  l i g h t 

spreading across 
sparkling psalms
with mermaid-glitter 
memories,
where peach-blush florals 
sing of solitude 
and not sabotage ,
where pearl peonies 
are tickled 
with innocence 
of the ink that 
flows through fresh -
coral pink perspectives,
nevermore, 
forbidden by the 
lens that had 
once tasted 
the obsidian oasis 
from the palm 
of long deserted life …
because she is ~ 
  my forgiven wings ,
     my unquestionable trust 
  navigating through 
 treacherous tributaries ~ 

for, their poisonous prayers 
can never fight the feverish feathers 
of a maternal warrior…

in territories of
thistle telepathy,
she is my sole truth; 
there will be days
when demons 
playing drums 
would seek to 
summon me deaf ; 
but immune 
to their mortal myths,
we will be ~
when we shall
sink and simmer 
on the crease of currents,
unquenched …
by the quivers of quotes,
which remain cloaked
within butterscotch blaze ~
gossiping with 
dangerous dolphins
that refuse to leave 
the den of nightmarish neons
midst weeping waters ,
murmuring 
with the moaning mist 
of melancholia ,
and diving frivolously 
  in the depth of 
    dusk-glazed doom ;
till you unleash us 
and let our bond 
be the fragrance of healing 

O  m o t h e r - flame,  
i will never leave
 your heaven ,
because in you ,
~  I feel my forever home ~ 

those diamond dandelions
might wear dust ~ 
and rhyme with raven cries 
but she will always be
my february fleur
of fluttering free verse,
free from any ache 
with her amethyst allure 
       
        my sweet plum scent 
        of pure cherry petals …

             I s l a n d
~ in the                of Intuitions ~

her faith is not unfathomable,
it is fathomless; 

for, in the fervour of fickleness 
and first forest flares ~ 
she says,
I am her favourite flower 
but for me 
she is my snow white moon ,
       a wild-hearted seraph ~ 
                … angel de la rose …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 12, 2026 at 2:56 PM
This wonderful poem has a mystical and dreamlike quality that draws readers into a world of rich imagery and emotion, dear Hiya. Your use of vivid language creates a vivid landscape filled with celestial and floral elements, evoking a sense of wonder and reverence. The structure reflects the poem's tribute of free spirit and boundless connection to your Mama. The poem atmosphere and deep emotional resonance make it a beautiful experience. Keep embracing this unique style—it's truly a gem!
Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 9:43 PM
So many gorgeous images used in this tribute to your sweet mother. I especially enjoyed the last three stanzas when you likened her to a flame, diamond dandelions, snow white moon and angel de la rose. Beautiful title and pictures! 🌹🌸🕊️
DiMino Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 9:03 AM
"where pearl peonies are tickled with innocence of the ink that flows through fresh - " Very beautiful! "sink and simmer on the crease of currents, unquenched …" -- So original and soulfully churning! Outstanding poetry throughout. Enjoyed very much.
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:09 AM
A sweet, lovely tribute, Hiya!
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:09 AM
A sweet, lovely tribute, Hiya!
George Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:18 AM
A jaw dropping string of words commemorating a love that is like a fresh scented bloom that will never wither or fade. A true celebration of a daughter's love for her mother through amazing imagery and excellent alliteration. Initially I mistook this poem to be someone else's. When I finished reading, I knew it must be yours or Ink's. I read the poem without knowing the author. "I am her favourite flower but for me she is my snow white moon" Again- "O m o t h e r - flame, i will never leave your heaven , because in you , ~ I feel my forever home ~" How proud she would be if she could read this! Lovely.... so lovely!👏👍❤️
George Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:04 AM
A jaw dropping string of words commemorating a love that is like a fresh scented bloom that will never wither or fade. A true celebration of a son's love for his mother through amazing imagery and excellent alliteration. Here your style resembles very much like that of Hiya or Ink. "I am her favourite flower but for me she is my snow white moon" Again- "O m o t h e r - flame, i will never leave your heaven , because in you , ~ I feel my forever home ~" How proud she would be if she could read this from skies above! Lovely.... so lovely!👏👍❤️
George Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:22 AM
You are right Hiya, I did the mistake of reading the poem without knowing the author. So sorry!
Sharma  Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Dear Valsa, thank you for your beautiful reflections and empathetic read! Beyond grateful! 🌙🌊💫💎 But, I think, perhaps you misread the name above the poem, I am Hiya ~ and I live with my mum, and I wish her long years of liveliness, with me and family... there is just so much more we have to do and breathe, until we ascend to heaven ~ this poem is just a lil token of tribute that I gifted to her yesterday and she loved reading it, happy tears haha 🫂💙🌌
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 6:04 PM
A breathtakingly immersive free-verse tribute, rich with surreal floral, oceanic, and celestial imagery. The drifting typography and spacious layout beautifully enact its themes of ascent, refuge, intuition, and a mother’s enduring, protective love; every luminous phrase feels like part of one sustained, dreamlike prayer.
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:58 PM
i am so enthralled by this enchanting work...september is my mom's natal month and i so miss her, having been cuddled above years back... the imagery here captures the eternal flowering of a matriach's devotion ...ohh, angelita de amor ...thankyou, hiya!
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:01 PM
Ahhh!! What a nice tribute to your mother. I enjoyed reading of your feelings for her. My mother passed 28 years ago, and I still miss her today. Thank you for sharing your feelings in this one. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Buehler Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 4:02 PM
This exquisitely beautiful tribute to your mother was a pleasure to read, Hiya! It is in my faves. Best wishes. 😀🌸
Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 1:59 PM
WOW!!! What an amazing write/beautiful tribute you have here. Great Pictures... You have been very blessed. Have a lovely day/weekend writing away..........
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 11:30 AM
- Very beautifully written with words that grab your heart, Hiya ❤️ - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 10:09 AM
Mothers deserve all the praise, they are the rock foundation of the family. I love the title. Beautiful tribute Hiya. Tom🌹
Kerr Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 9:51 AM
A dazzling diamond of a masterpiece encapsulated in this breathtaking opulent odyssey. Stunning tribute to a mother figure exuding sincerity and a wonderland of literary warmth. Such generous gifts of poetry devices you create, Hiya. Adore - “ february fleur,” “within butterscotch blazed,” “her amethyst allure.” But all your lines great.🌸🔥⭐⭐ As always from the heart thank you for the painstaking analysis of my latest piece. Warmth, Howard
Rodgers Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 8:09 AM
Dear Hiya, Ahhh, such a breathtaking, fiercely protective, and exquisitely sculpted tribute to a mother's eternal love. Defining her not just as a gentle sanctuary, but as a "wild-hearted seraph" and a "snow white moon," gives her love a majestic, invincible power. I loved how you named her your february fleur, your forgiven wings, and your forever home makes this one of the most tender, visually captivating dedications to a mother imaginable. A gorgeous, soul-stirring triumph! Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 7:56 AM
Pleasure reading you today A fave for sure for me ~ Sending you light always 🧜‍♀️ 🧚 🏝️ ☀️ 🌙
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 6:15 AM
A fave 😱🫂 Luvhhh yaahhhhh ❤️‍🔥 💋 🧚 🧜‍♀️ 🌙
Empress Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 7:55 AM
"those diamond dandelions might wear dust ~ and rhyme with raven cries but she will always be my february fleur" the alliterations and how youv described her! Awwwn how sweet and soul warming is that soulful poetess! You have a way with appreciating those you love in such poetic ways! I want to quote so many lines in this but know this ~ your mother is blessed to receive these beautiful metaphors woven so exquisitely! I just love the love! And flow of your poem! As if it came so easy
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 6:14 AM
Awwwwwn blessed I am! To receive such thoughtful compliments from you ..and to have a mother like my mum. Thank you so much my angelic ink, u da bestest always awwwn 🧜‍♀️ 🧚 😍💋❤️‍🔥🌹
Empress Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 7:53 AM
Awwn you and your mother ~ and the love and bond you both share always makes me speechless in awe of how beautiful it is! I love how intuitive your mother is, she reminds me alot of myself too, with her sincere emotions etc ~ and she is very caring even to your friends. I admire that about her. Please give her my love! And about the poem, I must say the title is perfect for a name of a perfume! Its so unique, feminine and gorgeous! And so catchy! You come up with such pretty names! 🧜‍♀️
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 6:10 AM
u jus feels everything jus the way I do, ma poetic guardian angel ... my mum is also really find towards you, knowing how so loving and kind and beautiful you are, always.. thank u so much lovely fairy goddess for always being dere! She is giving u love and starssz too! and gosh yes u are right, actually mums fav flower is rose and she used to have a very delicate and exotic russian rose perfume, rykiel rose 🌹 ✨ so I kinda was reminded of that ... 🧚 🧜‍♀️ 🌙 💫
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 7:11 AM
Great write! Have a nice weekend, best warmest wishes :-)
Sharma  Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:32 AM
thank you so much for visiting and reading, dear Abdullah ~ my most sincere gratitude towards your poetic generosity, sending you cosmic healing and starbeams, ⭐⭐🌙🍁💫
Lane Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 6:50 AM
Dear Hiya, you are such a sweet seraph to dedicate your heartfelt lines of love to your dear mother. I am quite sure she thinks of you as her adoring angel. She, who nurtured and gave you wings must be very proud of the woman you've become... I read in your lines how gracious and beautiful is your heart. You have become a rose in your own right and deserving of kudos for your kindness. ❤️⭐🌸
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:34 AM
What a lovely bond you have with your mother. I am fortunate to share the same with my daughter… 💕 my best friend.
Sharma  Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:30 AM
My sweetzzzzz Linsszzz, you yourself are a sanguine seraph ~ blessing me with the stardust of your words 😍⭐🌙💎🫂 very true though, my mother is the one who has instilled within me such deep sense of love and empathy, and for that my gratitude towards her is just beyond the horizon. She truly is my lifeline! 🥹 And yes, she loved reading this and there was a happy tears moment haha, the mother-daughter bond we have is just precious. Awwwn! Rose is my mums fav flowerrrr but u know recently I asked her again and she said that I am her fav flower, so that just blossomed heavens in my heart ~ sending you hugsszzzzz and tonszzz of loveeee, loveszzzzz 💫💫🫀🫀🍁🧜‍♀️🧚
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