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And Zenith Is Its Name

Among tall weeds are waving tulips, with satin pearls of dew
Blowing trumpets, and brushing grasses, with shades of cheerful tunes
Creating carpets soft and fair, where  every eye can rest,
Dancing petals kiss the breezes, in flirting dalliance 
Each breath of wind, caresses  strands, of lupine, blending in
Foxglove,  flax,  and buckwheat  stand, so slender  on their stems
Green buds, fragile, on the limbs, of trees in cloisters, high
Have opened bliss upon the ridge, while clouds are passing by
Ivy tendrils  wrap the oaks,  which grow exempt from time
Just as God would wrap  a heart with joy at Easter time
Keeping watch, a hawk swoops down, to scout a meadow's floor
Looming high, it circles 'round, in time for afternoon
Morning 's sun has long been gone,, and left a touch of warm
Night had left a trail of showers, from the passing storm
Opened flowers, bask in sunlight, breaking through the cold
Pastel colors, and fragrant blossoms, paint the world in gold
Question not the splendid wonder, it's  ours now to explore
Rejoice with eyes, behold and conquer, spring is at our door
Saturate the heart with "happy", as the day unfolds
To stand, alone, and hear the songs, birds and bees have told
Underneath the cloak of springtime, is all that we could ask
Voices call within the wind, and meadow larks will ask
Will we take this world for granted, or leave it to the rest?
Xanadu is ours to own, nature at it's best
You came, you saw, a sign of spring.......and
Zenith, is its name


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For The Abecedarian Contest: "Spring"
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
2/20/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Congrats on big win Carrie! Wonderful poetry here that tuk us to spring's zenith indeed!
Sergi Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations, Carrie: Beautifully worded prose.
La France Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Carrie, just a beautiful poem in every way possible, those X and Z words are so difficult to come up with, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem Oh Sweet Spring . . .
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:05 PM
'ahhh, another Xanadu person!! Makes me feel in good company. I love your Z choice too. Those two letters are the ones you have to kind of work out first before you even start, This is utterly charming and a well deserved win! Congratulations.
Nance Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Wonderful Springtime write, congrats on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 11:35 PM
This is brilliant Carrie! Congratulations on your top honor with this beauty!
A  Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 11:16 PM
amazing... SKAT
Roper Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
Johnson Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 5:11 PM
You paint a beautiful picture of the magic of spring. It could not help but be a winner. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Congrats!!!!Sara
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 11:23 AM
Hi Carrie, a big congratulations to you for your First Place win for your lovely poem about Spring! Hugs, Sandra
Stoner Jr Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Well done nicely written ,congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 6:19 AM
Congrats on your top win - this is outstanding:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 5:53 AM
fantastic poem Carrie congrats on your 1st place hugs
Richards Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 3:48 PM
I'm so pleased that you liked my poem, Shadow. Thank you very much......I'm in such good company ! And please take care of yourself....I hope you are feeling much better soon ! Hugs !
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:21 AM
OUTSTANDING TOPPING THE LIST OF WINNERS
Thoungamba Meitei Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 9:49 PM
Brilliantly presented.. Like your work. :D Rajkumar
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 8:47 PM
better offer you my congrats now Carrie - this is outstanding am sure it will place very highly for you! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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