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And Throughout Vast Purple Range, Visions Cascade Down

And Throughout Vast Purple Range, Visions Cascade Down No fictive dream deludes for now, so her heart bleeds And weeping spirit no comfort dares to arrive She that loved him took care of his earthly needs Now hides in darken forest, just barely alive And would hope to her ever really come As she prayed for dear life and needed relief She found that two parts does not always find its sum In her wounded heart was nothing but deeper grief Her precious lover had gone away oversea Alone on dreaded nights, his tender voice she heard And his tall, handsome ghost at night, she could still see In dark, she tried desperately to hug those words. And throughout vast purple range, visions cascade down. And Fate, her young life took with a dark, vicious frown. Robert J. Lindley, 9-11-2023 Sonnet, dark Note a friend asked me to write a quick sonnet. I said ok, I can write a ten to fifteen minute sonnet, and it will be good. Because my friend I cut my teeth on writing sonnets. So, I summoned up my muse and she laughed. She said , I bet you ten bucks you cannot do it in ten minutes. I did, so this is it with no edits. Truly I did not think I could do it but she gave me first 4 verses in about ten seconds,. After that it was me and my old tired brain splashing out ink. In my youth, I once wrote that fast all the time but old age has caught up with me now

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Date: 9/11/2023 9:15:00 PM
Great job in so little time. I remember taking 3 hours to do a sonnet when I started out. Nowadays I can do them in under half an hour but probably I was putting out better ones in the old days!!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/12/2023 4:05:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. Well under half an hour is very good time! On my timing I have a head start most of the time because either 2 or 3 verses come to me before I start writing and/or the theme. On this sonnet it was like that. God bless you.
Date: 9/11/2023 4:38:00 PM
I don't think you've lost anything over the years. Your sonnet is perfect in its construction. I especially like the last two 'summary lines.' Shakespeare's face is shining down on you. Have a blessed evening.
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Date: 9/11/2023 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, my good friend. Yes, those two lines were given me at the last couple minutes straight from my muse. She is like that sometimes, holding off to the last second...God bless you my friend.
Date: 9/11/2023 12:06:00 PM
I think you must write sonnets in your sleep you do them with so much ease.. They always flow and rhyme so well just like this one...
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Date: 9/11/2023 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, my good friend. Well my friend, I wrote my first dozen sonnets at age 15, which was 54 years ago. I've been writing them ever since. For decades it has been my primary form to compose in. In my twenties and early 30's about half my poems were sonnets. And I wrote hundreds of them. God bless you..

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