And Then I Opened That Door

Snow had fallen covering the cobble stone path to the cabin.
It had taken me hours to get here.
I was alone and needed to talk to her, one last time.

She had left in a hurry, after we had had a terrible fight.
I can't remember what it was about, we had so many.
Money, sex, drugs, her abuse, I lost count.

Work was long today and I called to tell her,
we needed to talk.At least one last time.
She said she'd be at the cabin until tomorrow,
when she was leaving.
To where?I don't know.

The night was cold, damp, the kind of night
that can cut through you.
I felt uneasy, as I was later than maybe she expected.
Either way I wasn't going to stay long.
Say goodbye, wish her well, all while keeping
my anger in check.
She needed help and I couldn't give it to her.
Maybe time and distance would help.

As I approached the cabin I saw two sets
of footprints.A trail of blood lead from the 
covered path across the porch.
My heart started pounding, who was here?
What had happened?Was she alright?
A candle light flickered in the frosted window.
My steps were slow, careful as I walked onto
the porch and then I opened that door,
the candle went out,I heard glass break, a gunshot.

I woke up in the hospital, hand cuffed to a bed.
A police officer spoke..You have the right to remain silent.

6/19/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:31 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
A  Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Frederic,, this is a wonderful win. WUV **SKAT**
A   Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Wigley Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Wel done, Frederic, I would have been genuinely miffed if your work didn't place. Also, the only poem featuring a 10-32 (to use US Police parlance). Regards, Viv
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 9:06 PM
I am so glad he placed this. I really am enjoying seeing all his winners. BIG congrats to you.
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Mystery, suspense, murder, a possible lovers triangle and a poem. Great job Frederic thanks for participating in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 8:58 AM
I DID confuse it. the one I did in rhyming quatrains was Mystic's fantasy contest. I think you were fine with this poem to use free verse. HOpefully that judge allowed any form!!
Parker Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Andrea...Mystic asked for A rhyming quatrain..
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 8:56 AM
OH WOW, that is quite the tale!!! For sure the character here looks guilty!! I love how you did this theme. but reread the rules, If I am not mistaken, she wanted rhyming quatrains. well, that is how I did mine, but I may have confused that rule with some other contest!!!
Parker Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Andrea this contest was any form..
Wigley Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 5:18 AM
Knife edge stuff, Frederic. Come on, then- whodunnit? Great write. Good luck in the comp. Regards, Viv
Onclaud Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 10:16 PM
dripping with suspense, frederick... the 'whodunnit' factor is one poetic high.. gripping me!..huggs
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