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And Then I Opened That Door

There’s no fighting the thick black wet, misty fog unwilling to be unfold
Winding path full of fearsome obstacles blocking and taking a stranglehold
Silhouettes of skeletal tree branches and roots reaching out to impose and take hold

Ever so slowly lifting my numb bare feet
With every footstep sinking into the wet sticky pitch black tar 

A spell that needs to dispel this illusion

Am I making the right choice
 In reaching for the door?

I feel a sense of freedom
If I open the door

Heart pounding against my chest
Soaking wet with sweat
Uncontrollable shaking
Legs buckling 

Placing my fingers around the doorknob 
Slowly turning
 
The door flies open

Blinding illuminating light
Brilliant rainbow colors
Clear blue sky
Smell of the ocean breeze

Drawing a deep breath with a sigh of relief

Bad dream

© 6/19/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/18/2015 4:43:00 PM
congratulations Eve!! I love the images of fright you have penned...:), jill
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Date: 11/16/2015 9:19:00 PM
Oh my Eve, this is awesome. Congrats SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 1:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve!! :) xxx*smiles*
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Date: 11/16/2015 9:46:00 AM
Congrats Eve! This reminds me of the ending of one of my unprinted writes on the door. Your imagey of the skeletal tree, and personification of the heart are beautiful!
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on this well deserved win Eve...hugs
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Eve.
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Date: 6/26/2015 8:40:00 AM
My dear friend you just continue to excel with a golden pen! This definitely deserves a 7 and the wonderful win! Love to you! Pandita
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Date: 6/26/2015 9:08:00 AM
Pandita, thank you for your wonderful compliment it does mean a lot to me. Hugs Eve
Date: 6/25/2015 11:21:00 PM
Eve, this is a wonderful win. WUV **SKAT**
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/26/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Skat, wonderful compliment I'm shocked myself Hugs Eve
Date: 6/25/2015 10:42:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/26/2015 7:13:00 AM
Linda, thank you I feel very honored to have won. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 6/25/2015 10:29:00 PM
Great verse, Eve, imaginative stuff. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 6/26/2015 7:14:00 AM
Viv, thank you for your inspiring compliment and congratulations also on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
Date: 6/25/2015 9:07:00 PM
Awesome, Eve!! I enjoyed this read and wish you a big congrats on your well deserved win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/25/2015 10:28:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the congratulations. I"m tickled to have placed in one of John Lawless contest. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 6/25/2015 8:08:00 PM
OH, Yeah!!! gotta hate those door dreams. Great visual presentation of the oncoming dreamscape....thanks for entering the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/25/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, John, I'm tickled to have placed in one of your contest. My computer is not showing any results yet so thank you for informing me and the congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 6/20/2015 5:19:00 PM
Beautiful pen Eve! I really enjoyed this one and the imagery is great dear friend.GL in the contest!A 7!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/25/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, Dorian, I tickled to have placed in one of John Lawless contest. My computer is not showing any results yet so thank you for informing me and the congratulations and the high rate. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 6/19/2015 4:44:00 PM
Brilliant gripping imagery Eve so pleased it was just a dream:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/19/2015 4:51:00 PM
Always, have never grew out of them. Thank you, Jan, Hugs

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