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I will turn back the pages of time, to mom and to when I was a little girl; mom would fill my pool and in I jumped, she called me pixie and I giggled. Then, she turned to her garden, trimming black-eyed susan; and white shasta daisies, and I helped too. I had my own tools, and I worked hard. She gave me a small patch in the sunshine, with bright petunias and yellow marigolds. Mom planted coneflowers for the monarchs, I planted columbine for the hummingbirds; and yarrow for bees, oh, I loved the garden. Then, mom said we need some rain, so we prayed and waited; and the beautiful rain showers came, gently falling on all the flowers and my columbine, petunias, yellow marigolds, and yarrow grew huge; and some crazy creeping thyme I had planted ! This is a treasured page in the book of my life. _________________________ June 20, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/And The Rain Came Copyright Protected, ID 16-9955-17-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Sunshine and Showers(old/new) sponsor, Robert Haigh Honorable Mention

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Date: 2/24/2018 7:59:00 PM
Very charming, BW. Much appreciated and enjoyable read. Congrats on your placement.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2018 9:00:00 AM
Line, thank you for the nice comment and the congratulations ~
Date: 2/18/2018 8:13:00 PM
Hello Broken Wings, it sounds like to me you have good memories of your childhood. have a nice evening my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2018 2:35:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for visiting, yes I have some wonderful memories and some sad too ~
Date: 2/18/2018 4:38:00 PM
I just love this! I felt saturated with flowers.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2018 2:35:00 PM
Sun, thank you for the lovely coment ~
Date: 2/18/2018 3:44:00 PM
And a most lovely page indeed...Sweet memories that remain thru the years...All the best
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Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2018 2:36:00 PM
Arturo, thank you for the visit and nice comment ~

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