And That's the Truth

roses mock the truth dandelions do not blush You are who you are John G. Lawless 5/17/2020

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/20/2020 12:23:00 AM

We cannot change who we are But we can change what we become ... I did not know what a Senryu was until I read Gershons reply. I liked this one very much very thought-provoking. Thank you, John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2020 10:45:00 PM

Love these in-your-face, short, succinct writes, John! Great! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/17/2020 9:42:00 PM

I love this John. Brilliant ink. Faveroo. xomo

John Lawless
Date: 5/19/2020 7:13:00 AM

Thank you Mo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2020 8:45:00 PM

this is so wonderfully creative!

John Lawless
Date: 5/19/2020 7:12:00 AM

Just observing the preening of the roses and the wild dandelion gala on the scraggly lawn

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/17/2020 8:01:00 PM

A wonderful poem that I truly enjoyed. Thank you dear friend. God bless you always, Love, Gina