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And Still the Troops Are Marching

...inspired by 'Dry Loaf' by Wallace Stevens The loaf is stretched, a wretched game, need is the arbiter of taste as pride takes on another meaning, duty is the call that summons, love and hunger both the same. Hope directed to the cause, troops in uniform are marching, those left behind forever searching for reports of dead and wounded, bitter tears or strained applause. Hunger troubles starving children, and the hearts of those who've worried, servicemen and sweethearts, wives and mothers with their feelings buried, lives on hold, a crushing burden. Spring appears and goes unnoticed, the crocus unappreciated, flocks of starlings block the sun, black as the barrel of a gun, and still the troops are marching. The sky is grey with gulls and smoke, waves broken like the battered land, sounds of conflict rise unceasing, troops advancing and retreating, marching, marching, 'til the bitter end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/1/2012 7:01:00 PM
We never learn. We repeatedly make the same mistakes blinded by power and greed. Excellent write.
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:01:00 PM
this is so powerful and really made me think about how our lives go on while those stuck in the military don't have the ability to notice spring and all that comes with it (as well as everything else they're missing). i love poems that make me think and yours so often do!
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Date: 6/2/2012 9:39:00 PM
And one would wonder, "Why". Only their voices can satiate our curiosity. Very nice <3
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/2/2012 9:42:00 PM
Indeed! Thanks so much...

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