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England had joined WW II, War declared against Germany All men and women of the age Required for conscription, joined, Bravery had to be shown, Even cowards could not decline. Trembling they stood in line. Excitement, fear, yet only teenagers, Adrenaline, anxiety, eagerness, These emotions all felt by each Soldier to be, What would I do, I guess like my dad, I would join, for that would be me! At eighteen, my father felt like a man, Prepared to do what he could And unbeknown to him then, what he would. Alan Hunt, yes, that was him, I am afraid it says on your records, You have flat feet, lucky you, You are exempt, next please, Oh no, said my dad, I want to fight, With all my heart soul and mind, I want to do what I know is right, All my friends have joined, I don’t want to be left behind, I want to enlist Please Sir, flat feet or not, I insist. Off went the Sergeant to speak To his officer, We need all the men we can get, So yes, let Him enlist, but not as a foot soldier So assigned to the Tanks was Young Alan Hunt, And without further ado, Became a soldier, And sent to the front. To Italy and Northern Africa Was Private Hunt assigned, In the Sahara Desert, in Egypt, And Sudan, all allies of the Nazis, He and his small troop Who were not afraid, fought, And thank God, never got caught, Or imprisoned, what a horror, That would have been, but something Of great interest happened one day, What I say, Is the truth, straight from the horse’s mouth, They were bombed in error From their own planes and from 4, That could fit in a tank, another 15 Jumped in, and 19 came out. All safe and sound. My dad said he needed a drink, For all were on the brink Of death, but it wasn’t their time, Otherwise, I would not be Writing this rhyme. The British troops were ordered to liberate Greece, which they did On October 12th 1944, And who was amongst them, But my dad, Although wars are bad, Good came of this frightful event, It was surely Heaven sent, For at a huge party my grandfather gave For the British boys, What joys, My dad met and fell in love With a beautiful Greek girl, A swirl Of a romance, they got married, Stayed in Greece for a while, lived In Cyprus and England and next Moved to Rhodesia in 1957, When I was three, Then Zambia, and finally to South Africa, My beloved country, My grand-daughter is now almost three.

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Date: 2/24/2025 5:57:00 PM
Jennifer, our history can seem so remarkable. How lucky those of us who are here and enjoying life are. We can easily forget that times have not always been peaceful and many died. I love that your dad had that romance and there was a cultural mix. That is a wonderful part of this story that you tell with such love, precision, and positivity. The experience in the tank being bombed is really something....my goodness!! Smiles!!
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Date: 2/21/2025 3:22:00 AM
I was just born when the first bombs fell. Italian fighters were cowards, but not he Germans. When I grew up I still saw the devastation around me. War is no solutions. Your memories are perfect.
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Date: 2/18/2025 8:27:00 PM
Fantastic write, Jen! Right p there with Tom Conningham's best. And, unbelievably, your dad and my dad had the same face as young soldiers. Amazing. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/18/2025 11:54:00 AM
Fantastic family story. Great bravery shown. Magnificent that he helped liberate Greece. Enjoyed immensely. Thanks for posting.
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Date: 2/18/2025 3:44:00 AM
An amazing story Jennifer, we must never forget the great sacrifices of those brave servicemen and women. Tom
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Date: 2/18/2025 12:21:00 AM
Wow Jen such a lovely poem and trip down memory lane of love, family and pride! Debx
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Date: 2/17/2025 3:37:00 PM
Wonderful family story and your dad was heroic. He left a great legacy
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Date: 2/17/2025 1:08:00 PM
- A family story... that has left its mark, dear Jenny - Imagine... only 18 years old... wooow - Great told :) - hugs
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