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Still She Wonders

She remembers The depth of his blue eyes And how he once told her Sullen and pensive That should she precede him He had it all worked out and Knew exactly what he would say hating such deep discussions she changed the subject and thought nothing more of it He died first the odds were right The house so empty now She recalled how sorting through his things She had never come across Any handwritten draft of a eulogy and she wonders to this day why he took his last love letter to his grave AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on December 11, 2018 for contest LAST LETTER TO MY BELOVED sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND and on June 3, 2018 for EARLY 2018 STANDARD CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 12/20/2018 10:09:00 PM
A wonderful poem of mystery, love or was it? Great Poem!
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Date: 12/21/2018 6:20:00 AM
it's interesting how poetry can be interpreted in different ways and what can be found between the lines... Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 12/17/2018 10:17:00 AM
Congratulation on your win!Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 12/17/2018 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Kenisha, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/17/2018 7:44:00 AM
Sad, beautiful, a bit heartbreaking-- congrats on the win, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/17/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, LJ. Based on my parents.
Date: 12/16/2018 12:01:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Line - A touching poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:36:00 AM
Some memories always remain.. .Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2018 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, SO, for giving me this awesome ranking. Taking risks doesn't always pay off but I'm very happy with this ranking for a poem that means a lot to me.
Date: 6/11/2018 9:52:00 AM
Hopefully, the wondering doesn't keep her down. Well done, Line. -Cary
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/11/2018 5:54:00 PM
No she doesn't dwell on it. Thank you so much for your warm visit and comment, Cary. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/5/2018 3:53:00 PM
Wow great poem. If we all could just tell our loves how we feel every single day...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/5/2018 6:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. And of course, you are absolutely right.
Date: 6/5/2018 10:49:00 AM
Haunting...forever. G.L. in the contest, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/5/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your mark, Gershon.
Date: 6/3/2018 1:13:00 PM
Terrific write Line, good luck in the contest...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/3/2018 11:17:00 AM
Contest entry maybe, but moving, definitely.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thanks, Brian. My mother's story.

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