And She Smiles

Somewhere in the distance
the horizon sleeps my canvas,
dawn comes to me in a dream

While the sun’s early rays
caress her,
widening her sable eyes and she smiles…

(before these eyes of mine can see)

Darkness drinks my landscape
in silence as I breathe, staring, 
sending my heart along this imaginary line

As she sips her cup,
warm within this daylight bliss
Mornings are her and she smiles…

(and I find a crescent moon smiling on me)

A glint, a faint hint of light I see
of grapefruit tint and raspberry ribbons,
like fireflies on the hill

She peers out the window,
runs her fingers through her hair, inhaling
blue morning glory skies, and she smiles…

(as I exhale the night and the eastern glow I greet)

Pastels in salmon flow gather of my scene
and I rejoice in the new born light for at last,
across the distance, we may share the sun

And she smiles…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Squyres Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Ahhhh..... the visuals are so pleasing. Love the "Pastels in salmon glow..." what a canvas that is to paint the scene upon. I'm smiling for the reading.
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October 1, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Thanks so much Debra, if it brought a smile to your face then it brought a smile to mine. :)
Chiri Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:45 AM
So Chris when was that book coming out;) gorgeous write my dear friend!;)
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:53 AM
Not anytime soon I'm afraid. : ) Thank you again my friend. Your nice comments are always a smile on my face
There Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 10:08 AM
This is a beautiful moment you have shared ~ tender and affectionate within a backdrop of gorgeous imagery ~
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Thank you my friend for always leaving such nice words for me to find. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
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October 1, 2019 at 10:00 AM
inhaling blue morning.. Wow... sweet words... longing words... lovely words... Ann
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Thank you so very much Ann. I appreciate your kind words today
Adams Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:40 AM
this one is exquisite from start to finish...i stand in awe of your talent my friend...your words always just float down with such finesse...wow...amazing write!
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I always look forward to your visits to my work.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:26 AM
This is precious writing Chris, you do have a gift, thanks for sharing! Share the sun, darkness drinks my landscape...just wow!
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.
Scars Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:09 AM
awwww how beautiful! you are so gifted :)-luloo
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so very much Luloo. :)
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Oh, I love this! Beautifully written and a great way to start this day. By the way, I have been introduced to these K-cups I don't usually have for coffee and having a bit too many lol. Enjoy the day Chris :)
Green Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I having been using them for a while, they sure do make it easy to drink too much coffee. : )
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