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And She Smiles

Somewhere in the distance the horizon sleeps my canvas, dawn comes to me in a dream While the sun’s early rays caress her, widening her sable eyes and she smiles… (before these eyes of mine can see) Darkness drinks my landscape in silence as I breathe, staring, sending my heart along this imaginary line As she sips her cup, warm within this daylight bliss Mornings are her and she smiles… (and I find a crescent moon smiling on me) A glint, a faint hint of light I see of grapefruit tint and raspberry ribbons, like fireflies on the hill She peers out the window, runs her fingers through her hair, inhaling blue morning glory skies, and she smiles… (as I exhale the night and the eastern glow I greet) Pastels in salmon flow gather of my scene and I rejoice in the new born light for at last, across the distance, we may share the sun And she smiles…

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Debra Squyres

Date: 10/1/2019 2:26:00 PM

Ahhhh..... the visuals are so pleasing. Love the "Pastels in salmon glow..." what a canvas that is to paint the scene upon. I'm smiling for the reading.

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 2:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Debra, if it brought a smile to your face then it brought a smile to mine. :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/1/2019 11:45:00 AM

So Chris when was that book coming out;) gorgeous write my dear friend!;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 11:53:00 AM

Not anytime soon I'm afraid. : ) Thank you again my friend. Your nice comments are always a smile on my face

Hello There

Date: 10/1/2019 10:08:00 AM

This is a beautiful moment you have shared ~ tender and affectionate within a backdrop of gorgeous imagery ~

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you my friend for always leaving such nice words for me to find. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.

Ann Foster

Date: 10/1/2019 10:00:00 AM

inhaling blue morning.. Wow... sweet words... longing words... lovely words... Ann

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much Ann. I appreciate your kind words today

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/1/2019 9:40:00 AM

this one is exquisite from start to finish...i stand in awe of your talent my friend...your words always just float down with such finesse...wow...amazing write!

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I always look forward to your visits to my work.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/1/2019 9:26:00 AM

This is precious writing Chris, you do have a gift, thanks for sharing! Share the sun, darkness drinks my landscape...just wow!

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 9:39:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/1/2019 9:09:00 AM

awwww how beautiful! you are so gifted :)-luloo

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much Luloo. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/1/2019 8:11:00 AM

Oh, I love this! Beautifully written and a great way to start this day. By the way, I have been introduced to these K-cups I don't usually have for coffee and having a bit too many lol. Enjoy the day Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi. I having been using them for a while, they sure do make it easy to drink too much coffee. : )