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And Nature Was Happy

On the day she was born Fields of wheat danced joyously, like sailors coming home. Skies hued in pink to announce a newborn female to the world The beasts of the wood ran exalting All of nature celebrated the birth of this extraordinary girl God sent down a smile- dancing birds in a feted swirl. 6th place in the "Heaven Sent Smiles" contest by Carolyn Devonshire. A tribute to the day of her birth. A. Green

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Date: 7/12/2010 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations Amy on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful words interpreting the picture Amy, many congratulations >> James
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Date: 7/12/2010 2:07:00 AM
What a wonderful birthday tribute to Carolyn, Amy-- I really enjoyed that last line, how those birds just danced & swirled :) -congrats! --& welcome back btw :) nikko :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:22:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Amy
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:09:00 PM
wow, you went all out with nature here. This was great fun to read. congratulations, Amy!
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Amy, on your succvess in the contest. agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:17:00 PM
Wow!! I see why Carolyn liked this one. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:56:00 AM
Wonderful use of imagery, Amy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2010 10:27:00 AM
BTW did I say it was awesome .. AWESOME AMY?
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Date: 7/10/2010 10:26:00 AM
This is beautiful Amy.. such a new and different take on the photo .. unique ..I luv it.. good luck in the contest... nature kicked in from your vacation I see.. great entry.. with luv..
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