Tahera Mannan Poet Limerick

And Jill Came Tumbling Down

Then there was this big girl called Jill
Who yearned to be seduced by big Bill
She laid herself on the ground
And to her horror she found
She’d made a huge mountain out of the molehill

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Ralph Taylor March 20, 2013 at 4:58 PM Congrats, Tahera. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Bukang Liwayway March 19, 2013 at 8:00 AM awesome limerick friend Tahera :) Congratulations on your win on PD's contest. Cheers! Hugs, Maria

Painted Hunter March 19, 2013 at 6:31 AM haha...good one. Congrats!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair March 19, 2013 at 1:32 AM That's how it turns out to be with many of the Jills, funny write, pd must have enjoyed it a lot:) Jag

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2013 at 6:35 PM Tahera, thanks for the chuckle and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA

Seren Roberts March 18, 2013 at 6:05 PM well done Tahera,,,,,Seren

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2011 at 12:11 PM Tahera, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2011 at 6:15 AM Congratulations Tahera on your HM in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2011 at 8:27 PM Hmmm, I expected this to be on the top ten! WEll, conrats on the HM, Tahera. I sure thought it was one of the racier ones! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser January 18, 2011 at 1:27 PM Many congrats Tahera on your fine win in the contest with this chuckle of a Limerick....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 18, 2011 at 12:45 PM Congrats Tahera on your HM in the Limerick contest .. with this great one .. my friend.. enjoy your special honor along with me ... with luv..

Sara Kendrick January 18, 2011 at 9:33 AM Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun January 18, 2011 at 8:24 AM Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2011 at 5:57 AM Colossal idea..Enjoyed..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morning...Your presence at my work sent me a ray of light..Sara

Wilma Neels January 16, 2011 at 6:45 AM Tahera, a funny and witty limerick, if for Deb's contest.. All the best to you :) love Wilma

Debbie Guzzi January 15, 2011 at 6:31 AM Almost got it! There once was a pretty girl called Jill[9]Who yearned to be seduced by big Bill[9]She’d made a mountain outufa molehill[you need 9 or pump up 1,2 to 10 syllables ;)]

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 9:54 PM hahahaha, Deb will LOVE IT, you dirty little girl.

Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2011 at 9:17 PM Hey, that's a real funny limerick, Tahera. If this is for Deb's new contest, I wish you success. The last line had me laughing out loud - "Big Bill" was not so big after all! Great work. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick January 14, 2011 at 8:52 PM Lol! Tahera, this is a perfect Limerick. Is this for Deb's contest? I'm still working on mine. Hope you're having a great weekend.. Love, Annalise