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And Jill Came Tumbling Down

Then there was this big girl called Jill Who yearned to be seduced by big Bill She laid herself on the ground And to her horror she found She’d made a huge mountain out of the molehill

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/20/2013 4:58:00 PM

Congrats, Tahera. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/19/2013 8:00:00 AM

awesome limerick friend Tahera :) Congratulations on your win on PD's contest. Cheers! Hugs, Maria

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/19/2013 6:31:00 AM

haha...good one. Congrats!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 3/19/2013 1:32:00 AM

That's how it turns out to be with many of the Jills, funny write, pd must have enjoyed it a lot:) Jag

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2013 6:35:00 PM

Tahera, thanks for the chuckle and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/18/2013 6:05:00 PM

well done Tahera,,,,,Seren

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 12:11:00 PM

Tahera, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your HM in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:27:00 PM

Hmmm, I expected this to be on the top ten! WEll, conrats on the HM, Tahera. I sure thought it was one of the racier ones! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 1:27:00 PM

Many congrats Tahera on your fine win in the contest with this chuckle of a Limerick....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 12:45:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your HM in the Limerick contest .. with this great one .. my friend.. enjoy your special honor along with me ... with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2011 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/18/2011 8:24:00 AM

Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 5:57:00 AM

Colossal idea..Enjoyed..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morning...Your presence at my work sent me a ray of light..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/16/2011 6:45:00 AM

Tahera, a funny and witty limerick, if for Deb's contest.. All the best to you :) love Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/15/2011 6:31:00 AM

Almost got it! There once was a pretty girl called Jill[9]Who yearned to be seduced by big Bill[9]She’d made a mountain outufa molehill[you need 9 or pump up 1,2 to 10 syllables ;)]

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 9:54:00 PM

hahahaha, Deb will LOVE IT, you dirty little girl.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2011 9:17:00 PM

Hey, that's a real funny limerick, Tahera. If this is for Deb's new contest, I wish you success. The last line had me laughing out loud - "Big Bill" was not so big after all! Great work. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/14/2011 8:52:00 PM

Lol! Tahera, this is a perfect Limerick. Is this for Deb's contest? I'm still working on mine. Hope you're having a great weekend.. Love, Annalise