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And In My Dream-


and in my dream-  I find myself in a lush forest
dripping wet with life, steamy and sultry
I am one with nature and with the aqua drifting water
Oh, the soft moss and the wet lime ferns
I float in tranquility and beneath me water reeds grow, swaying
so many hues of greens and colors dwelling in harmony
juniper, sage, olive, blue, pine . . . 
emerald green of a little frog and dark brown of a crocodile
small yellow little fish kiss my toes-  a lovely fushia flower
     an orange snake slithers, a fluttering purple butterfly
       a blue birds sings sweetly- green twining vines
         meandering in the dark foliage, my sage eyes whisper
           come fall into the lush depths with me, I will take you to a world full of 
utter peace where all beautiful shades of nature mingle and entwine.

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Contest 231

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breedt Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Hi Constance, nicely done here. It put me inside your beautiful forest. I could èven hear the sounds
Perlin Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Sorry not to be original, but I agree with Janis; This is just beautiful imagery! Congratulations and this is sensational...
Jumbo Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Congrats on your win Broken Wings
George   Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Beautiful, Constance. many congrats on your win. Lainey
Leachet Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 4:36 AM
This was very beautiful. It took me to a place that was quite and serene, thank you.
La France Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Tatiana thank you for visiting my poem with the beautiful ~
Hauser  Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:43 PM
This is truly beautiful
La France Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Mike thanks so much for the beautiful ~
Sands Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:18 PM
This one is really neat. Nicely written!
La France Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Heidi, thanks so much for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
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