And Here We Are

"and here we are"

oblivious and unaware and then there you were

attracting my attention with my heart blocked 

somehow my eyes and ears opened discovering you

from that fine moment unleashed were sun and moon

I realized the glance and your attire were for me 

at that instance you realized my awareness of it all

with a new glance and attire love was born shining light

full of glamour and glitz for a world belonging to us

words somehow richly became notes and here we are

SkyWatcher
06-01-21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Horsman Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 2:17 AM
Beautiful trip down love's lane. Love the poetry it's so alive.
Ricci Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Good Morning hr - Thank you Thank you. Truly. Your visits and commentary are never taken for granted. May all know of love. Have a wonderful day and enjoy poetry soup (smile).
Y. Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 1:07 AM
Hi Lisa, This sounds like the beginning of a beautiful romance. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day;-)Alexis
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Good Morning Alexis - Hi. Thank you very much. Never do I take your visits or commentary for granted. May this day find you well. I will see you on your page very soon. Have a wonderful morning and enjoy poetry soup.
DiMino Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:43 PM
So romantically joyful! We need more of these. Lovely write!
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:38 AM
Hello Joe - Good Morning. You have just made my day with your gracious and generous review and commentary. Truly. From the start I have written in my own style and way. I leave vintage works and expressions up to others so I very much appreciate what you wrote. I'm so sorry for the late response. I will see you on your page very soon. Enjoy poetry soup.
Brul Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Lovely poem. The simplicity of the choice or words made this poem truly impactful!
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:35 AM
Good Morning JCB - You have a good eye. Yes, I write with simplicity because it works for me (smile). I leave vintage works and expressions up to others. I'm very sorry for the late response for such a wonderful review with commentary. I am honored that you thought my choices made an impact. Have a wonderful day. Enjoy poetry soup and I will see you on your page very soon.
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 12:41 PM
The start of a happy romance Lisa, long may it continue. Tom
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:31 AM
Good Morning Tom. Hi. Oh what a beautiful and lovely review. Truly. Thank you very much. I'm so sorry for the late response. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page very soon. Enjoy poetry soup.
Callus Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Love is certainly capable of catching us unawares, Lisa...and once it does, it can last for ever more! ~ Warm regards // paul
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:29 AM
Hello Paul - Good Morning. I am so sorry for the late response. I very much like your intake on love and also appreciate the lovely and gracious review. Thank you ever so much. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry soup. I look forward to returning to your work soon.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Sometimes people fall in love without any care of how they dress and behave. An optimistic view. Blessings.
Ricci Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:27 AM
Good Morning Victor - I'm sorry for the late response to your lovely commentary. Thank you very much as always. I will return to your page soon. Have a wonderful day with blessings always.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Very nice Lisa. Sounds special :)
Ricci Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Good Morning Heidi - Thank you very much. I'm honored you noticed my entry and that you took the time to comment. May love be there for all. Enjoy the day and poetry soup as well.
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