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Me, You, Selfish, Contest, Compare, Win

and everything was opposite like a mismatched pair of shoes what I thought was coming would be what I would lose and everything was opposite like looking into water you'd think you'd see another dog and drop your very last quarter and everything was opposite named well with tidings few tomorrow was the same and yesterday I thought anew and everything was opposite the love that in me burned with no anticipation of the apathy returned. 8/7/19 Clutching at Straws Kai Michael Neumann, Sponsor

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Date: 1/26/2020 4:58:00 AM
Janis congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:40:00 PM
Janis congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/16/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Dear Heart for your contest.
Date: 8/8/2019 10:06:00 AM
Janis, Is it true that opposites attract? I think it must be so. -Richard
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:35:00 AM
Hope so. Thanks Richard.
Date: 8/8/2019 8:59:00 AM
Wow. Excellemt, Potent poem! My best to you in the contest!
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:35:00 AM
Thanks Maureen.
Date: 8/8/2019 12:01:00 AM
in nature's feedback (fractal) reality... the blossom of order is chaos... butterflies can an cause a hurricane
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:42:00 PM
Opposites are powerful.

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