And Always With You Sweet Angel Sings

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beginning with nine syllables to create the cloud

multiplied by nine to give it body and wings on each couplet unrhymed

standing alone the end opens the cloud to begin with couples to lock this piece together

drawing a couplet of a different style ten is the magic number to perfection

Through the pearly gates within one smile golden sparkles all shades of colours Where the rainbow's end shines brightest cut underneath the sands of your feet rose Salted spice baptised eternally turning over tides blossoming waves hold Breathless ocean mist warmly glistens starlight inside a blink enchanting Flying without wings joins forever

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 11/30/2016 11:29:00 PM

lovely

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/29/2016 12:42:00 PM

I'm not sure but I think Dorian liked it. So did I. Best wishes, Charlie...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/29/2016 10:59:00 AM

This may be brilliant, I can't decide and have read it 4 times. I love each lines beauty and the intensity in the last line, from start to stop it is both an intellectual read and an emotional reaction. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem ... CayCay

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/29/2016 8:12:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^