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And a Broken House-Key

A frigid December night in a somewhere Midwest town, He'd been out late on some errands, buying stuff he needed; Came home dog-tired, ready to shower and stretch, Put his key in the door, and received The shock of his life. The key didn't work; it didn't move this way or that: His mind reeling, again and again the key didn't turn as he quivered; Heart pounding, thoughts racing, anger welling up in him; Looked up for a moment, stopped in his tracks, his will failing, So grim. Four squad cars were ready, though quiet for now, Officers poised to pounce should he crack; Stepped cautiously back from that ex-entrance of iron, Spirit sinking, thoughts askew: Surely it's all a huge misunderstanding. All of three months he'd lived in the town, Hardly knew a soul at work, never mind on the block; --Turned out in the dead of brutal midwestern winter's night With two dimes in his pocket and a broken housekey. He made the first call, "I'm sorry to disturb you..." "No trouble at all, can I help, you sound lost..." A voice from heaven over an AT&T line, Rescued him from damnation and embarrassment's cackle. A saint with a white beard smiled at him in the doorway, welcomed him warmly, whisked him in from the cold; showed him into a closet-sized room, A king's palace to a man With a dime in his pocket And a broken house-key That fits no family. March 04, 2018

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Date: 3/7/2018 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :~) enjoyed reading! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2018 10:20:00 PM
Eve, thank you for your support. Your comments keep me going! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/5/2018 6:52:00 AM
oh the ending really got to me, such loneliness. great poem thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 3/5/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words AND for sponsoring the contest, giving us all an opportunity to s-t-r-e-t-c-h, g-r-o-w, and hone our poetic muse. :) Gershon

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