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~And Then Again~ ( Trine ) I just love smelling the roses with all their sweet delicious perfume Enjoy watching them in front of me thrive and then just full bloom Pretty multi-colored butterflies hover and drink from the top It's so sad when I see one by one the roses' petals fall just drop Then I hear a very loud sound coming from up above the sky And the rain starts to fall so hard and the clouds seem to cry Then the sun completely hides and in its place I hear another loud boom But I know that sunshine again will come back when all this rain will just stop And then hopefully once more lovely roses will bloom and beautiful butterflies again will fly. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 July.11.2016 ~Author's Notes: The " Trine " is a French poetry form or style." Trine " is Anglo- French meaning " Three each " .

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Date: 7/11/2016 11:22:00 PM
Yes, Dorian, I too can sit and watch butterflies on flowers all day. A lovely write. Viv x
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Date: 7/12/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly,Viv,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

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