Ancient Slopes

Ancient mountain slopes Beautifully weathered, in Mirrored reflection

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2010 4:28:00 PM

Beautiful scene that you have presented here. I can see it clearly as if it were a picture. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/13/2010 5:37:00 AM

Hey this is beautiful, James! Simple and right on! Ergo beauty!. love it. Saying good luck is wishing someone well for something that may or may not be there. This one is already there my friend. God bless.-Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 7:37:00 PM

Antoher great entry for Raul's contest if this is the one u entered.. good luck to u my Highlander friend.. beautifully descriptive energy in your Haiku.. my entry is Panorama... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/12/2010 6:28:00 PM

excellent work! the best of luck if you've entered the contest :) ------Ell

Marty Owens

Date: 2/11/2010 7:02:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

Date: 2/11/2010 3:39:00 PM

A lovely view! Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!!! Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/11/2010 3:36:00 PM

great ideas, good luck