Ancient of Days

One step leaves an imprint
upon which all were made
Whether in organisms unseen by human orbits
or on another entities backside.

Accustom to our Environment
how can we pose questions
She's been here since the sands started downward
when They started TIME. 

Other life out there, but there are limits
man thinks man is so intelligent
and yet he can not see his own boundaries
cant see past his frontal lobes.

Mother breathes in our pollution and poisons
as we tear her limb from limb from limb
to scribble this dribble
She moans and writhes with every page.

Society won't permit us to act
If done what needs to be; we suffer
so be it, 
can't stand to hear her cry. My Mother.

For when She cries no tears fall
Instead life leaves as does her will to help.
Elements will vanish
and pit man against  man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/11/2009 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/11/2009 4:53:00 AM
Hey, this is an heartrending, thought-provoking piece, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excelent piece being re-featured dis week. Great you Peter! Adeleke
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:23:00 PM
Peter, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 8:05:00 PM
Congrats Peter on the re-feature. Vince
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Peter. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:20:00 PM
Knock! Knock! Knock!. It's me, Ernilando. Congratulations once again on your deserved featured write.
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:22:00 PM
Awesome poem so profound congrates on being featured this week ... Love Jayne x
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Date: 4/29/2009 11:39:00 AM
Congrat's on being features this week Peter, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/29/2009 11:20:00 AM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/28/2009 10:42:00 AM
Peter, congrats on having your poem featured this week!!!!!!
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Date: 4/27/2009 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations Peter on this social statement "Ancient of Days" being featured. Vince
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2009 9:50:00 PM
Hello Peter, a good reminder to all. Congrats on your featured. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/26/2009 3:05:00 PM
A timely reminder in your poem, that we cannot continue to use and abuse our earth. Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/22/2009 1:11:00 PM
Mother earth has been the brunt of man's foolish ways for far too long, Peter. Somehow, she has managed to survive, but we should never take her for granted. Great poem! Much to think about here, Peter.
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