Premiere Contest WinnerAncient Aliens

Ancient Aliens

They have always been here
ancient? – alien?
living amongst the unknowing
hiding in plain sight.
How have they altered
our past? – our future?
advanced or hindered
our progress – our failure.
How have they touched us
with an unseen nudge,
aligned the stars
that we might follow
crumbs of reason,
sat with us in silence
awed by our insolence
humbled by our fervor.

They view us from a distance- 
time and space overlapped
knowledge and inexperience
in conflict with themselves.
Knowing that in time
experience becomes
the proving ground of knowledge,
knowledge the anvil
shaping the experience.

They are the flat rock skippers,
the kite flyers, paper airplane makers,
sidewalk chalk drawers, 
mud pie makers, frog catchers,
butterfly chasers, bug touchers,
flower sniffers, feather collectors.

They will always be here
ancient – alien
wiser than their years
greater than their fears
in forever’s - ancient moment
alien – in human form.


1/6/2018

submitted to – Ancient Aliens – Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 4, 2018 at 4:19 AM
I saw this before and wanted to comment on it but didn't know what to. It is simply brilliant. I especially love your last two stanzas. Also how you said 'altered our past/future' because only we are responsible for both. Congratulations on very wonderful win :))
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Awesome top winner. Well deserved, John.
Haight Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Another very interesting take on the contest theme, John! Wonderfully expressed to really stir our thoughts! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Doubly Wonderful! Back with big congratulations hugs :) awesome win John. xomo
Mckee Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 9:16 PM
We are always alienated by our selfish ness and our pride . Good Poem .
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:23 AM
thank you, I appreciate you stopping by to comment.
Wimmer Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 9:47 AM
I like the way you write.
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Alison, I apologize for my delay in responding
Leiser Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Awesomely creative! Loved this!
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:21 AM
thank you Laura, sorry to be so late in responding..
S     Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Interesting take on the topic! Very thought provoking indeed!!! Best of luck in the contest! ~ Judy
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Judith, a few of those aliens(aka grandchildren) have been holding me hostage....
Michael Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 11:05 AM
A wonderful subject indeed...You treated it well...All the best John
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Arturo and I apologize for my delay in responding
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Wonderful!
Lawless Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Thanks Maureen, sorry to be so long in responding...I was abducted by a few of these "ancient aliens" aka "grandchildren"
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