Ancient Aliens Premiere Contest Winner

Ancient Aliens

They have always been here
ancient? – alien?
living amongst the unknowing
hiding in plain sight.
How have they altered
our past? – our future?
advanced or hindered
our progress – our failure.
How have they touched us
with an unseen nudge,
aligned the stars
that we might follow
crumbs of reason,
sat with us in silence
awed by our insolence
humbled by our fervor.

They view us from a distance- 
time and space overlapped
knowledge and inexperience
in conflict with themselves.
Knowing that in time
experience becomes
the proving ground of knowledge,
knowledge the anvil
shaping the experience.

They are the flat rock skippers,
the kite flyers, paper airplane makers,
sidewalk chalk drawers, 
mud pie makers, frog catchers,
butterfly chasers, bug touchers,
flower sniffers, feather collectors.

They will always be here
ancient – alien
wiser than their years
greater than their fears
in forever’s - ancient moment
alien – in human form.


1/6/2018

submitted to – Ancient Aliens – Poetry contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/4/2018 4:19:00 AM
I saw this before and wanted to comment on it but didn't know what to. It is simply brilliant. I especially love your last two stanzas. Also how you said 'altered our past/future' because only we are responsible for both. Congratulations on very wonderful win :))
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Date: 3/3/2018 12:21:00 PM
Awesome top winner. Well deserved, John.
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Date: 3/3/2018 12:17:00 PM
Another very interesting take on the contest theme, John! Wonderfully expressed to really stir our thoughts! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:03:00 AM
Doubly Wonderful! Back with big congratulations hugs :) awesome win John. xomo
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Date: 1/9/2018 9:16:00 PM
We are always alienated by our selfish ness and our pride . Good Poem .
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John Lawless
Date: 3/3/2018 9:23:00 AM
thank you, I appreciate you stopping by to comment.
Date: 1/9/2018 9:47:00 AM
I like the way you write.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/3/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Alison, I apologize for my delay in responding
Date: 1/8/2018 10:54:00 PM
Awesomely creative! Loved this!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/3/2018 9:21:00 AM
thank you Laura, sorry to be so late in responding..
Date: 1/7/2018 1:32:00 PM
Interesting take on the topic! Very thought provoking indeed!!! Best of luck in the contest! ~ Judy
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John Lawless
Date: 3/3/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Judith, a few of those aliens(aka grandchildren) have been holding me hostage....
Date: 1/7/2018 11:05:00 AM
A wonderful subject indeed...You treated it well...All the best John
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John Lawless
Date: 3/3/2018 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Arturo and I apologize for my delay in responding
Date: 1/7/2018 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/3/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, sorry to be so long in responding...I was abducted by a few of these "ancient aliens" aka "grandchildren"
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