Gary Smith Poet Couplet

Ancestral Ripples

Ancestral ripples infuse my mind
As I look out early morn.

Twilight luscious, Vermillion hued
The day anew reborn.

Frangipani scents the air
As mockingbirds serenade,

I love this land, where I was born
Where my roots were laid.

A menagerie of memories I have,
Pellucid, are the days.

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Eve Roper January 17, 2018 at 10:36 PM Nicely done, Gary, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Gary Smith January 18, 2018 at 4:16 AM Thank you Eve :)

James Inman January 13, 2018 at 3:04 AM A very gentle feel and smooth read Gary. Gary Smith January 13, 2018 at 5:57 AM Thank you James :)

Susan Ashley January 12, 2018 at 9:28 PM Returning with congratulations Gary with your wonderful win with your beautiful write. ~Susan Gary Smith January 13, 2018 at 5:57 AM Thank you Susan :)

Line Gauthier January 11, 2018 at 6:42 PM Delightfully well written. Congrats on your win, Gary. Gary Smith January 12, 2018 at 6:02 AM Thank you Line :)

Heidi Sands January 11, 2018 at 5:43 PM Congratulations Gary :) Gary Smith January 12, 2018 at 6:01 AM Thank you Heidi :)

Silent One January 11, 2018 at 2:58 PM Great use of the words Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Gary Smith January 11, 2018 at 3:18 PM Thank you Silent One :)

Heidi Sands January 6, 2018 at 5:45 PM So beautiful Gary. I enjoyed this :) Gary Smith January 6, 2018 at 5:46 PM Thank you Heidi :)

Susan Ashley January 6, 2018 at 3:49 PM A gorgeous write, Gary. You employed the required words with elegant ease to produce much beauty with your exquisite imagery.. best wishes for a win. ~Susan Gary Smith January 6, 2018 at 5:17 PM How kind Susan, thank you :)