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Ancestral Ripples

Ancestral ripples infuse my mind As I look out early morn. Twilight luscious, Vermillion hued The day anew reborn. Frangipani scents the air As mockingbirds serenade, I love this land, where I was born Where my roots were laid. A menagerie of memories I have, Pellucid, are the days.

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/17/2018 10:36:00 PM

Nicely done, Gary, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Gary Smith
Date: 1/18/2018 4:16:00 AM

Thank you Eve :)

James Inman

Date: 1/13/2018 3:04:00 AM

A very gentle feel and smooth read Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/13/2018 5:57:00 AM

Thank you James :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/12/2018 9:28:00 PM

Returning with congratulations Gary with your wonderful win with your beautiful write. ~Susan

Gary Smith
Date: 1/13/2018 5:57:00 AM

Thank you Susan :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/11/2018 6:42:00 PM

Delightfully well written. Congrats on your win, Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 1/12/2018 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Line :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/11/2018 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations Gary :)

Gary Smith
Date: 1/12/2018 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :)

Silent One

Date: 1/11/2018 2:58:00 PM

Great use of the words Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Gary Smith
Date: 1/11/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/6/2018 5:45:00 PM

So beautiful Gary. I enjoyed this :)

Gary Smith
Date: 1/6/2018 5:46:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/6/2018 3:49:00 PM

A gorgeous write, Gary. You employed the required words with elegant ease to produce much beauty with your exquisite imagery.. best wishes for a win. ~Susan

Gary Smith
Date: 1/6/2018 5:17:00 PM

How kind Susan, thank you :)