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It is said that the world is quite strong.  When we both agreed, we were wrong.  But systemic risk leads to a spare call.  And it makes life hazy, as we shall. When weak surfeit fulfills incisive inquiry,  the diction is made utterly dull and wiry.  Implied options for a farewell gathering The effect is similar to lathering. A dreadful jester with mixed craziness.  When guilt clouds your eyesight, haziness A genuine illusion and a shaky submission  You are vigilant in the face of recognition Lacking a faithful foe as a recent symbol, To a mindset that is wrong at its core. For the moral majority, act proudly humble,  to develop skills in each particular sector. While skilled amateurs and realistic untaught, assist fetch harmony to the dissonance. This reliable test incites calm unthought. That is aimed straight at the outer imminence. It requires steadfast cynicism and rustic grace,  so as to withstand this negative preening. And sway away from school without a trace, to allow the word "normal" a fresh meaning.
Written: September 29, 2022

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Date: 9/29/2022 4:40:00 PM
Excellent poetry, Lasaad. I had to look up a few words, but the message was clear. Agreement without understanding, complacency to avoid thinking, and going along with the unthink crowd, lets to unthinking action at it's best. A lot to think about is this poem. Thanks for reminding us to use our mind before preceeding. Have a great week! Bill
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