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An Unwritten Fairytale

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Inside an inkwell, lives a fairy tale A classic, filled with love and misery Where," Once upon a time" has long set sail And "happy ever after's" yet to be It's plot, a knight, once schooled in chivalry His quest for love, the dragons he has slain From Crusades 'round the world to frippery The jousts with Father Time who drew disdain Yet deep inside is where brave knight remains A lifetime of adventures, good and bad The love he searches for, still unobtained Still finding peace, his "grail" this Gallahad Perhaps, I'll buy a quill one of these days Release Sir Knight and legends of his ways by Daniel Turner Spenserian sonnet abab bcbc cdcd ee

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 6/15/2018 12:19:00 AM

I could be upset with you for such deep, Daniel contents, but your poem presented so cussing words beautifully that my upset is preoccupied enjoying the awe in this poem. Fairy Tale, enchanting first two lines captured my little girl and quick turned her adult with sadness so irresistibly penned. A kicker. (parts of me now want to argue - I'm stifling them) GREAT poem, any other day and I may have cried. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/3/2018 7:08:00 PM

G'day Daniel … a wonderfully written sonnet Daniel. I very much enjoyed - Lindsay

Carole Duet

Date: 5/7/2018 7:01:00 PM

I hope you find that quill, Danny, because you are certainly a gallant knight, and I see you as that unsung hero I've heard about.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2018 12:51:00 AM

You are a true sonneteer, Danny, AND a white knight!!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2018 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Remember when I first started writing sonnets and you helped me learn to write in meter. Well now it seems like everything I write has to be in meter. It is stuck in my head! Had it not been for Lin and you I would not be the sonneteer you say I am.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/11/2018 10:13:00 AM

Hi Daniel: A wonderful sonnet released from the inkwell. Nice to be reading your lines again. Best, SuZ

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/26/2018 11:04:00 PM

Thank you, SuZ. I am so happy you enjoyed it. Hoping you and yours are well.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2018 12:30:00 PM

What a lovely sonnet ... A fairy tale or autobiographical Daniel,I think many lovely knights are still waiting to find their fair lady , so lovely to see you back hope you are keeping well:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/7/2018 11:00:00 PM

Thank you, Jan...and yes, it is autobiographical. So nice to see you. I am well and hope all is well with you.

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/4/2018 11:29:00 AM

Hello Danny, I can see that you are still churning out the sonnets, and doing them oh so well -- as usual!! I really enjoyed reading this one. The lead-off with "Inside an inkwell . . . " is quiet excellent. And the verbal play of your words and verses in this Spenserian format is perfect. It was a true joy to read this one my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/4/2018 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, Gary. It is always my pleasure when you drop by. Take care and have a great week.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/3/2018 4:40:00 PM

Sweet! Is this autobiographical? ;) Hugs, dear.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2018 7:01:00 PM

Yes, Eileen it is autobiographical. Thank you for your kindness and your support.

Bette Bavington

Date: 3/3/2018 11:39:00 AM

This is an awesome piece. Of tales told long ago. One of my favorites is fantasy. I hope all is well with you.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2018 7:00:00 PM

Thank you, Bette. So kind of you to take the time to read and comment. I am well. Yourself?

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/3/2018 2:24:00 AM

Hello my friend, this is a great poem, a life time of adventure. Hope you find your own grail...

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thank you Pashang. i have found peace, my grail.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/2/2018 9:13:00 PM

Hi Daniel, this is an awesome Sonnet, the words took hold of me and took me into a world i love, the world of fantasy. Your words painted the old images in my mind.You have mastered this form my friend. The world of knights and fair maidens may be gone but it returns in wonderful writes like these. Has to go into my faves Daniel. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/2/2018 11:18:00 PM

Hello Mike. So nice to see and hear from you again. i hope life is treating you fairly. I always appreciate your kind visits. Take care. Tell Mary I said "hello".

Joseph May

Date: 3/2/2018 5:02:00 AM

How are you Daniel..hope all is well..You told this tale well...best wishes

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/2/2018 11:16:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I am well. I appreciate you taking the time to read and for your continued support. Take care, my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2018 12:45:00 PM

It's a pleasure to be re-reading this lovely poem, Danny. I don't think you need to acquire another quill; the one you have serves you well! Regards // paul

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/2/2018 11:14:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. Hope you get things sorted out. i appreciate your time and kindness.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/1/2018 7:28:00 AM

Danny, your sonnets are SUPERB. This one movingly conveys the theme of goals accomplished--and those not claimed! Janice

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/1/2018 1:13:00 PM

Hello, Janice:) Thank you so much. You are so kind. Hoping you are well.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/23/2018 9:42:00 AM

What an amazing sonnet you have penned dear Sir Daniel! I am one who love to read the old tales of knights and chivalry and this magical write just pulled me in! Well done, my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/1/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you sweet lady. I appreciate your kindness.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/21/2018 12:35:00 PM

I love the snse of ancient lore that your wonderful poem expresses Danny. I always enjoy your poetry and this gem left a big smile on my face! Thank you!: )

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2018 3:25:00 PM

Thank you, Mrs Connie. Hoping you are well:)

John Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2018 8:52:00 AM

Great concept and execution Danny enjoyed this very much, looks like the muse has returned...that's great!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2018 3:25:00 PM

Thank you, John. It's still in and out. When I catch it long enough, I write. Always my pleasure when you drop by.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/19/2018 8:19:00 PM

Hello Daniel, I have enjoyed this fairy tail. have a nice evening my friend.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2018 3:23:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. I appreciate your kindness.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 2/16/2018 2:52:00 PM

Wow. Love a good fairy tale. Great write Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2018 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, Elizabeth. So nice to see you again. Have a great weekend.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/16/2018 1:39:00 PM

Wonderful sonnet Daniel, the comeback is on a roll...

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2018 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. How's life been treating you?

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 2/16/2018 3:41:00 AM

You posted it! It's fantastic! So good to hear from you Daniel. Get the quill, get the quill, I want to know the whole story!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2018 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Jeannie. So wonderful to see you again. Hoping you are well. Perhaps, one day:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2018 2:14:00 AM

- They were brave ... and they had to kill dragons and trolls, to win the princess :) -Let the old fairy tales live, David - A wonderful writing :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2018 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise. I wish you a wonderful weekend as well.