Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

An Unforgettable Journey

Cyclone stars appear in the night sky 
alongside circular lights abreast an amber moon 
He quietly sits by the piano  and plays 
sending this heart of mine into a tailspin; 
Aiming straight for my glass soul 
he shatters every cruel reality and replaces it 
with a soft fantasy of gold...
Pouring out a melody of love's solitary journey   
he unlocks every door and window.  
Unaware of the air that he breathes beside me,  
this longing I hold unfastens, beneath a canopy of gold  
I am suddenly shaken, re-arranged and changed forever. 
Written by: Mystic Rose

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Bj Legros Kelley November 18, 2023 at 1:08 AM Gosh, you did it again! I didn't tell you, but I faved you last poem, and, well, this one too. You are lifting my heart, I am so blessed. Hugs to you :) <3 :)

Bill Baker November 16, 2023 at 4:21 PM A FAV for my list, Vie. Beautifully written love poem and a poem on the changes that may take place as one becomes aware of the power of Love. Old things pass away, and all things become new. I'm happy for all of you that have this experience in your life. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paula Goldsmith November 14, 2023 at 9:33 AM Your "An Unforgettable Journey" is a wonderful write. Life is a journey with good/bad in it. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day..........................

Joseph P. DiMino November 13, 2023 at 12:50 PM "he shatters every cruel reality and replaces it with a soft fantasy of gold..." -- Lovely! My wife often plays piano and I sing; music seeming to heighten our love for one another, somehow elevating the great joy of daily sharing and caring to even loftier spiritual expression.

shah hussein November 13, 2023 at 6:30 AM BLESSINGS ,HUGS HEART TOUCHING POEM.

Ink Empress November 13, 2023 at 3:55 AM Awwn this made my heart sing for you, how beautiful and ethereal is this poem. Your words flow so delicately and in such eloquence. And i love how you’ve expressed here. Sometimes it takes just one soul to change it all and place fantasies of gold whilst unlocking all windows etc, i love every word in this. Definitely a fave. Sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar November 13, 2023 at 2:13 AM True love can make a real person, with the right emotions. Blessings.