An Unending Story

The first robins of Spring, a joy to see,
Their song, a pastoral symphony,
But brace for stormy winds and wild March skies,
Then add more birds, and bees, and butterflies,
And sunsets, and dawns, and garden flowers,
And torrential floods and gentle showers.
With its perfumed wine so potent and sweet
Summer's debauches are raucous, but fleet.
Trees tremble and blush in Fall's altered air
And hang scarlet adornments in their hair.
Then envious Winter puts on her show,
Enshrouds it all in a blanket of snow.
So seasons endure above and beneath,
An unending story of life and death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Halliday Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Like that internal rhyme there, debauches are raucous! Higher level vocabulary usage!
Slaughter Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Thank you, Mark.
Bowring Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Really enjoyed this lovely sonnet Jim. So well written and I love the way you have described all four seasons beautifully. Love the lines, in particular, ‘ Their song, a pastoral symphony’ ‘ Trees tremble and blush in Fall’s altered air’. Delightful. Thank so for sharing :):)
Slaughter Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Thank you, Christina.
Fowler Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Surely sounds like heaven to me Jim. It has a pleasant lilting quality. :)
Slaughter Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Linda.
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:04 AM
Your sonnet rhymes and flows really well and you describe the four seasons perfectly using this form, creating imagery, which is a pleasure to read..
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, S O. Fortunately, Nature lends itself rather well to poetry.
Bauer Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 1:46 PM
nicely crafter, jim! i enjoyed your take on the seasons...
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Thanks, Ilene. I'm so glad Fall is finally here.
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