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An Unbearable Sorrow

When the greatest of all judges of the universe gives a judgment, it is ever thus, It’s been a long while since you both left, You each went separately in peace and without any fuss, I felt gutted then, and even now, I am still utterly bereft. You were two of the most generous, tolerant and loving people I have ever known and met, You lived your lives selflessly, pleasing others without any regret, In your love and care, not once did I ever feel neglected or deprived, Our shared memories will never fade, and without fail, every day they are revived. I know we are born, and then we will die, I hear it, I see it, but I still struggle to understand why, I know you are both looking down on me from the skies, That’s why I tell myself every day not to be sad and not to cry. There’s no one now to wipe my tears or to chase away my gloom, I selfishly believe you were taken from me way too soon, Your absence has left a void in my soul and a hole in my heart, And the heaviness of things not said and unfinished still lingers, refusing to depart. You were both deeply loved and are now sorely missed, I have accepted your absence and found solace in the knowledge that you are both resting in a place of comfort and bliss. For in the loss of a loved one, there’s a lesson in the gloom, To live, love and treasure each other in the now, and to avoid regrets that can consume. By Zyrool A tribute to my Loving parents.

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Date: 11/7/2024 6:07:00 PM
How fortunate that you had such wonderful parents. Your poem is full of love and remembrance. Thank you for your talent. Your parents would be proud.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/8/2024 6:30:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful words, Hilda. They mean so much to me. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a wonderful weekend my dear friend.
Date: 11/4/2024 8:47:00 PM
"I have accepted your absence and found solace in the knowledge that you are both resting in a place of comfort and bliss." So many can relate to this statement. This is the only way to cope up with the loss of dear ones. Quite recently I lost my elder sister. But the thought that she is in God's Kingdom and in a place of bliss lessens my grief. Enjoyed this loving tribute to your parents, dear Zyrool.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/5/2024 4:01:00 AM
Thank you for the read and your support, Valsa. I am So sorry to hear about your loss, may God grant her a beautiful place in his garden. Only their physical being is gone, everything else is still with us. Have a wonderful rest of the week.
Date: 11/4/2024 11:37:00 AM
you've written a beautiful poem to honor your parents' memory, zyrool. it's very sad to lose the people you love, but it sounds like you had a wonderful relationship to them and that is something many people cannot say about their mother and father...
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/5/2024 4:07:00 AM
Hello Ilene so happy you dropped by and thank you for your support. They spoiled me with their love and care. Stay Blessed and Have a great rest of the week. my friend.
Date: 11/4/2024 10:00:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, this is a lovely tribute to your parents. You do have lovely memories of them. They are watching over you. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/4/2024 11:16:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, I can sense you were very close to both parents. You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/4/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thank you for the read and your kind words, Darlene. They were my everything.. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Date: 11/4/2024 5:23:00 AM
What a sad, sweet elegy Zyroool. My mother passed a year ago Nov 1 and my dad in June, seven months apart. Both were in their 80's so they lived a good long life. Hang in there
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/4/2024 7:24:00 AM
Hi Tom, thank you for your support and kind words. Sorry to hear about your loss, my friend. My parents were my ‘go to’ for everything. Wishing you a beautiful day and great new week ahead.

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