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An Open Gate Led To a Chapel

And the cemetery was
quite and intensely sullen;
a damp breeze blew
anticipating a cool rain...
an open gate led to a chapel.

Two marble angels stood
by the Gothic bronze door,
their looks were too somber;
and walking in I saw candles
burning beneath white skulls
stacked in piles like bricks. 

The smell of wax from 
the dripping candles
was of a different scent;
the brass cross gleamed
casting a shadow on 
the oval floor made
of yellow and green
tiles resembling a mosaic.

Looking around, I discovered
more skulls on wooden shelves,
these had imprinted names
and looked down on the incognito
ones in self-pity and sadness.

I wondered why of such
a massive grave of skulls
without skeletons; a weird
sensation penetrated my
body getting steady chills.

I glanced across the opposite
wall and spotted a memorial
plaque with the deplorable words
" The final rest of decapitated  
men who rose against
their king who washed 
his hands in their blood. "  

Horror and disgust pierced
my being, I reacted to
that appalling sign rushing
out of the darkening chapel;
and stepping outside of
that flickering chamber,  
the crispiness of the morning
air filled my lungs with relief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/23/2016 1:00:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 5/23/2016 2:14:00 PM
Greetings to you, Funom. Thank you for your kind comment today. Your words are so uplifting and encouraging. Thank you for being my friend. Your support is very appreciated. Have a terrific day. Best Wishes, Andrew.

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