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An Open Fire

I miss an open fire.
Warmth, these days, 
is breathed out of the thin lips
of a plastic vent commanded 
by a button.
There is nowhere now 
where I can sit 
and stare into the depths 
of a dancing flame, 
enter that sacred space
where thoughts and mystery 
meet and reconnects something 
in me to its earliest roots. 

I miss how an open fire 
centres life around its glow, 
how it works to draw us in, 
gathers us to share 
in its living warmth. 
I miss how it fills in the silence 
with its sounds,
the crackle, the whispering hiss, 
the sudden bump 
of a falling log.  I miss
poking and prodding 
the charcoal remains, breaking
them apart and seeing embers
ignite into a bright spill of flame.

I miss the smell 
of burning wood, the incense
that first sanctified our ancestors
humble homes and awakened 
a wonder that set us off
on our human quest.
I get it that an open fire is now
not an environmentally friendly
choice but a polluting relic 
of the past. I know 
the romance of it
no longer thrives.
It's rather like old religion,
better gone, but it leaves
a hole in our lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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