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An Old, Far Away Man

He cocoons my cocoon Warmer than friendship Softer than love All cloud hands and lay lines Tracing his smile If I were closer I would burrow Into his arms Inhaling the dusty stars buried in his fleece Fading Fading Waiting Until he's strung like beans And lost to forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/1/2011 2:39:00 PM
wonderful..i love the "inhaling the dusty stars" line..TAH
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:42:00 PM
Great job Gracie
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:14:00 AM
Wow! I love this poem. Good job!
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