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An Ode, Verses Born From a Friendly Dare

An Ode, Verses Born From A Friendly Dare To write an ode, to a spirited gal One that no dream even dares to surpass To a ravishing beauty my good pal As a gift to celebrate her sharp sass. Nay, such enchanting a task tis overdue. Dare I, to one in dreams only, I knew. Rather I, jot down verses that soft sing Of her beauty, she a most lively lass And the radiance her glow often brings Her elegant voice, words said never crass. Nay, such enchanting task tis overdue. Dare I, to one in dreams only, I knew. When dawn's fantastic smile her eyes so shines I dare, boast of kisses given in mass Creative words and such heart I opine Chance for another kiss, I dare not pass. Nay, such enchanting a task tis overdue. Dare I, to one in dreams only, I knew. Robert J. Lindley, 1-10-2022 Ode, ( On a dare, muse, pen and paper summoned up this ) Note: * -- sass sass /sas/ Learn to pronounce INFORMAL•NORTH AMERICAN noun impudence; cheek. "the kind of girl that wouldn't give you any sass" verb be cheeky or rude to (someone). "we wouldn't have dreamed of sassing our parents"

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Date: 1/17/2022 5:38:00 PM
This was a great read. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Well done.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/17/2022 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. So very good to hear from you. This one came about on a dare. I slammed it out in one flow as quick as eating a delicious hotdog. lol She told me, that I could have done better. And well, when truth is spoke who am I to deny it? God bless..
Date: 1/12/2022 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful tribute Robert, tongues will be wagging lol. Tom
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Date: 1/12/2022 1:37:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I have had tongues wagging many times before, especially so in my wild younger years. God bless..
Date: 1/12/2022 3:30:00 AM
I reckon your use of sass here superb and lent an air of fun to this piece. What a pleasure to read.
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Date: 1/12/2022 4:34:00 AM
Thank you my friend, and right you are! The use of the word sass was thought of as theme setting air of fun and jovialty, not only in the composing but as well in the lady my heart and mind so very fondly remembered from my wild days of my wayward and energetic youth. God bless..
Date: 1/11/2022 11:36:00 AM
Hey Robert, it has been a while since I have enjoyed your poems, as I have been on a 7 year hiatus; but what a joy to return to PS and see you thriving still and producing such wonderful poems. What a beauty this is. Blessings to you and yours in the New Year! Neva
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/11/2022 12:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Welcome back, 7 years is quite a break. May your blessings be quite wonderfuly abundant this New Year! I hope you are back to present your new poems! God bless..
Date: 1/11/2022 8:26:00 AM
Great poets do create masterpieces of their Life.. of huge beauty and richness what you craft in words! The genuine sentiments and the power of your inspiration are eloquently rendered, deeply felt and immensely admired! Thank you so much for sharing your precious gem, Robert.. always a treat to read your second to none poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 1/11/2022 12:40:00 PM
My friend, thank you for visiting my page and leaving such a positive and deeply considered comment. Yes, poets are indeed a rare breed. And as I read here , so many are vastly talented and so very richly embued with such awe inspiring image projecting powers. Magnificent painters that so many truly be! God bless..
Date: 1/11/2022 6:07:00 AM
I did so want to name my dear poet friend that made the dare, but she asked me not to do so. However, it was indeed a gift to me as it stirred my muse to wake, chastize me a bit and even give me a few verses to get started. Truth is, she is too oft a very stubborn ally(speaking of the muse ). And even quite a bit lazy more often than not...
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