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An Ode To Weary War

Within the stand where armies hide
with little but sticks and stones 
come forces too large to abide
who’ve traveled far from home.
Armed to the teeth with planes and tanks
they’re here to garner wealth
for when the rebels meet their end           
they’ll be little need for thanks
and certainly none for stealth
and little left but corpses to attend.

Civil war bring the vultures out in men
the mercenaries who fight for gold
the corporate war mongers rush to attend
The starving do as they’re told
for why not fight for mother land
and die for those left behind
a bullets death is easier than wasting
and is what man’s honor demands
If only, if only, man was less unkind    
less prone too warring and debasing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Debbie
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:32:00 AM
Nice one enjoyed. Congratulation for your win, my friend. bl
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:04:00 AM
Debbie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones. CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 6:57:00 PM
human nature on display, the petty dollar gatherers, of blood n death no more to say, the beast it froths n slathers....
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. A great anylitical poem. Love Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:55:00 PM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON HM IN ODE CONTEST WITH THIS PROFOUND PIECE LUV.. HONORS.. NO TORNADO IN SIGHT HERE BUT SO GLOOMY WITH THREAT OF LOTSA RAIN.. MOVING DAY AND SUCH A RIOT.. EVER TRY TO MOVE AND COMMENT ON PS? NOW THAT IS A CHALLENGE..HAHA..THANKXX FOR ASKING..LUV..
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Date: 8/26/2011 5:24:00 PM
wilfred Owen like...'strange meeting'....yea war are an irony....are to solve 'problems' but couse more problems.
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:53:00 PM
war is such wasted energy but protection is necessary to keep the peace Debbie.. wonderful elements to this piece my friend and many facets emphasized to bring attention to current issues luv.. good luck in the contest..
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:07:00 PM
Eventually, our robots will fight theirs; the rest of us will stay home. You defined it well.
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:00:00 PM
Wonderful write right on the mark...with love...old Jack
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