An Ode To Loss

In knowing how my heart aches, I know not
Where to hide my sorrow. Etched, onto flesh
So numbed, by the cold break of tomorrow. 
My thoughts it would seem, merely cascading
Sullen faces; the infinite places
We had seen.
Afflicted by a love so fleeting - 
You left it biting at my being
In some callous bout of cruelty, unforeseen.
For sake no more than infidelity...
You did but everything
To forget me.
Yet you see it most in dramatists;
A trial of false feelings eloquent,
As if to belittle their own.
And still the latter more prevalent -
A trait I'd grown to love;
Be it the marrow, the mere dust
That forms my bones.
And yet I evermore despise -
I could hunt the breach, the distance
In those eyes
As they meet mine.
And all notion, upon notion, of retrieval
Will not help me seek the better 
Of your evils,
For you chose to make the bed
In which you lie.

And so my darling, promiscuous love,
My mind breeds only bitterness.
While that bloody, bludgeoned organ
In my chest beats memories
Vigorous.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:33 PM
MARK, ENJOYING THIS POEM ONCE AGAIN
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 4:43 PM
So many emotions flow from these lines - welcome to soup Mark i enjoyed reading this powerful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Love this. I feel your passion, anger, betrayal and love.
A   Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:53 AM
Hi Mark, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Mark, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 5:52 PM
An excellent Ode Mark. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
English Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Thank you, and it is a pleasure to be among such talented individuals.
Lane Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 8:24 AM
I had to look, only to be disappointed not to find others posted, but I hope you will. Welcome to this site. ~ Lin ~
Lane Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 8:22 AM
I'm in awe of this, Mark. Just when I think I've read a line that is my favorite, I read the next, and the next only to find they are all worthy of being the best. Describing the heart as a 'bludgeoned organ!" I hope you have posted other poems. Excellent poet.. indeed you are.
English Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 6:50 PM
You are far too kind, thank you. I will endeavour to post some more of my work over the next few days; your desire for more provides much merit to my poems.
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