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An Ocean of Love

A crystal flow of blue, the soft sensation of love will do Lost in restless waves, exciting the senses in sultry days Gently colliding upon the skin, an ocean of love shall begin A night that only lovers know, the sparkle in emerald eyes will show A sweet splash of temptation, an unforgettable kiss of dedication This teasing touch cannot replace, being lost in an ocean of moments with you, Simply melting in your embrace

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John Gondolf

Date: 4/18/2019 9:01:00 AM

This is one of the first poems of yours that I read. AS I go back and re-read it, it holds so much more meaning now. You are indeed a sweet splash of temptation.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/18/2019 4:33:00 PM

Sometimes, we feel moments differently- after coming back and re-reading something. Perhaps emotions tug at the heart a little more. Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/8/2018 12:31:00 AM

Oh, to drown in such depths ... lost to the warmth and darkness of passion, sublime! What a gorgeous write, my friend - another fav for me, (and I am picky about what I add to my list). Blessings, passion, and exquisite joy to you, my friend! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/8/2018 12:24:00 PM

Oh my! Thank you Greg, for once again adding this to your favorites. Yes, this is sweet, soft, sultry and passionate. Love should always feel like this, the depth- devotion in each sensual kiss. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many blessings to you, with sweet touches of love. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/19/2018 1:28:00 PM

Wonderful write...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Tobey. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/4/2018 2:23:00 PM

Your poetry is simply beautiful, Brandy, I’m so glad I discovered you this afternoon. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/4/2018 4:38:00 PM

Thank you John for your lovely comment. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/30/2018 10:03:00 PM

It's a beautiful feeling to body surf on the rhythmic swells in 'an ocean of love'. Floating on the softness yet immersed at the same time. A brilliant poem Brandy, that pulses romance with stunning emotional and physical imagery. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/30/2018 10:55:00 PM

Thank you Susan. Your thoughts hold so much truth. I appreciate your kind words. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 6/30/2018 7:26:00 PM

Perfection.. romantic lines that build to your amazing close, "This teasing touch cannot replace, being lost in an ocean of moments with you, Simply melting in your embrace" Wow! I'm at airport heading home and will not be on as much as I was this week on the road.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/30/2018 8:15:00 PM

Thank you Lyric Man. :) The waters touch is alluring, playful, soothing and so much more. I am happy that you enjoyed this. Such a joy reading your thoughts. Please be safe going home. ~ Brandy