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An Oarsman

not a captain or a first mate but an oarsman was to be their fate the oarsman row the ship along either one , two or hundreds strong one small part of a large ship but surly the tool that carries it from sea to sea an oarsman must have rhythm and his back must be strong his work is heavy laden and his toil is all day long sometimes when they falter they feel the lash of the whip the weakness of an oarsman may alter the course of the ship the life of a slave. an intelegent animal a God forsaken trade, reserved for the damnedable the oarsman and his fate though terrible and long they did the work and sang the oarsman song they pulled the oars moving the ship along and all they get for thanks was the lash of the whip places were discovered empires were built the sea's goods were delivered from oarsman driven ships but still ; no thanks for the oarsman or slave. Has America ever thanked the slaves? or the lowly who work the hardest and are paid the least are we still yet oarsmen

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Date: 8/13/2009 8:24:00 PM
Maybe someday things will be equal for all persons and we will make a better world. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/8/2009 5:00:00 AM
John iii This is a great poem about a long lived human condition. Whether paid by money, as today, or in kind, as was done in Egyptian times (during the 7 year famine that enslaved so many Hebrews in exchange for food.) There always seems to be the controllers and the workers. Maybe someday, there was be equal respect for every human job. It is as a whole that mankind has achieved his standing on earth. Some are humble. Some defiant, some hateful, some self-reliant. ll God's children. DAS-J
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Date: 8/5/2009 3:59:00 PM
Love the writing, John. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/5/2009 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful write, as always, you also have some soup mail from me, keep up the great writing....Aleera
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:32:00 PM
Powerful poetry John ! I could not agree with you more ! Loved this !! james
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Date: 8/2/2009 10:57:00 AM
A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you John. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2009 6:11:00 AM
interesting write John,your writes always my pleasure--bravo--charma
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Date: 8/1/2009 5:04:00 PM
Hi John! thanks for comments! re- your ?....have you seen the movie "Fargo"??? this blockbuster was filmed right down the street from me! I work on the Skyway" (our system of building-to-building connections over the streets in DT Minneapolis, thua avoiding winter! over 100 skyways!) 2-blocks from where scenes from the film were staged...and we do talk like this! thanks for comments! jimbo
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Date: 8/1/2009 12:53:00 PM
A very interesting write, John, that is the case now, but justice of equally is comming. Moses
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Date: 7/31/2009 10:23:00 PM
compassionate piece! John! yes! I believe we are!!!.... jim
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