An Island Hut

in the far fringe of a woody island
with a river slithering along in gentle leaps
and a mud road stretching behind
there is a solitary hut 
visible through the patches
of light and shadow
with its precincts lapped by the waves
and the rich alluvial soil 
engendering trees of robust growth

in it, live a man and wife
a pair made for each other!
their likes and longings 
blend and bleed into oneness
they grow in the joy of a living love
making life a celebration in a rare way

their humble hut is always blessed
by seasonal fruits from trees of tropical kind
where giant trees stand watch over

loaded with jack fruits and tangy mangoes 
with creepers in greener leaves
and their foliage, ever in a merry dance
latching and intertwining their tendrils 

their dinner, rich with fresh fish
caught through angling
in which both engage in the evenings

in the air, there is a subdued roar
made by the swish and swirls of life

but in the silent interstices
between the rush and blur 
there descends a heavenly peace
when their souls go on a dance
making theirs a happy home
sweeter than all mansions of gold

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Date: 12/28/2021 2:55:00 PM
Valsa, I would love to live there. You have decribed an island of paradise, such images and peace. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 12/12/2021 4:30:00 PM
Sounds like Paradise to me. Exquisitely sketched, Valsa! ~ gw
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Valsa George
Date: 12/13/2021 9:03:00 PM
It is a paradise, where Adam and Eve still stay, without getting expelled as they obey God's commands. :) :) Thanks a lot Gershon!
Date: 12/12/2021 10:40:00 AM
I love this poem and the message which lies within its folds. Happy are those who are one with nature and who are happy without having to rely on artificial wealth. This so much reminds me of my childhood days when life was simple and yet happy. ~ Regards // paul
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Valsa George
Date: 12/13/2021 9:01:00 PM
I agree with you cent percent, dear friend ! Those who stay close to Nature, leading a simple life are happier than those who are born with a silver spoon in their mouth. Thanks a lot for your kind visit to my page.
Date: 12/11/2021 12:57:00 PM
A poetic picture, so lovely presented in the imagery. Your words invite the reader into the love they share. I enjoy reading words that depict love and happiness to those that share oneness in love. Thanks for sharing, Valsa. Have a good day! Bill
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Valsa George
Date: 12/12/2021 3:01:00 AM
I watch the lives of people around and see the simple ones, enjoying life better than the affluent ! Thank you very much Bill for your lovely words !
Date: 12/11/2021 10:21:00 AM
Some people are happy with what they have whilst others want what their neighbours have, but the more one has, the more one has to worry about, and taking care of each other can easily fill the day .... Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/12/2021 2:59:00 AM
Absolutely right Rico,....! When we look for what our neighbors have, we will never be happy in life. Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 12/11/2021 6:57:00 AM
A poem, that brings out the riches of simple living. the poetry is anything but simple, yet such skill is this creation.
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Date: 12/12/2021 2:56:00 AM
Simple living has a charm of its own.... Thank you so much harry.... ! Stay happy and enjoy the season
Date: 12/11/2021 5:04:00 AM
A simple life, too, can dwell in a paradise--as you so eloquently illustrate, Valsa. I see the images of happy couple and their humble abode--living a heavenly life---proving how powerful love can be.
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Date: 12/11/2021 5:22:00 AM
These people of the soil are always blessed by what Nature offers them in plenty. Though they lack the splendor and affluence of the rich, they are content with their simple way of life. Thanks a lot Vijay for your beautiful comment! Have a great weekend.
Date: 12/11/2021 12:48:00 AM
What a treasure of a poem you wrote. Happiness oozes out of it and makes one feel elated. Great words and imagery. ~~
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Date: 12/11/2021 3:41:00 AM
There are some such people around.... people who make heaven on earth with minimum facilities and stay contented with what little they have. Thank you dear friend for your lovely comment.
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