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An Irish Redemption

An Irish Redemption Downtown lights glimmer off in the beckoning distance I watch them twinkle a dewiness as I lie, safe and sweet in the fresh softness of the Irish linen Watch them lights reflect starry halos off the deep dark bay tonight. This harbor a mirror to my soul, glittering black, like a miner’s coal... wood carved cherry oak, plush vinyl, rain battered glass, a setting to remember I insist; their voices hovering, yet their songs I am forgetting… to know I cannot resist. The ebbing tide retreats, a salty mistiness on my skin, I see his wings caress as they unfold. I see his prey. A quick dive to catch, and then… He and I fly away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/1/2020 1:54:00 AM
Great Piece Jennifer. Much has happened over here since you first presented this in 2011. I may have just experienced some of this, at 6.30 am this morning - High tide on Tramore beach. It was rough, due to the 'tail-end' of " Aidan" from the Atlantic.
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Date: 10/31/2020 10:41:00 AM
Gee what a pretty poem, my fellow Jennifer! I really like the images.
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:37:00 AM
A very unique write. Congratulations on making it in the first round of cuts. A worthy poem, indeed!
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Date: 1/4/2012 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Jennifer. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 5:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Jennifer. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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