Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Bite Size Contest No. 69    Sponsored by Line Gauthier

August  13, 2023

An Invitation I Could Not Deny

This morning, soft amber light woke me.
Its warmth held me in a lover's embrace,
whose fingers gently touched my face.
Sunshine danced with such lively esprit,
beckoning me to come and play outside.
An invitation that could not be denied.

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Terry Miller August 24, 2023 at 1:24 AM Wonderful poem; congratulations

Michelle Faulkner August 23, 2023 at 5:47 PM A beautiful start to a beautiful day, wish I could wake up to that soft amber light! Congratulations on your win in the contest~ Lin Lane August 23, 2023 at 6:09 PM Thanks so very much, Michelle. I didn’t know the contest had been judged.

Gary Radice August 14, 2023 at 12:09 PM I love the personification here Lin..and the great opening line in particular. Cheers - Gary Lin Lane August 23, 2023 at 6:05 PM Thanks, Gary. Sorry I didn’t see your kind comment before now.

Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2023 at 1:37 PM A wonderful write/invitation/pretty picture. I would enjoy playing outside with you. Have a fun/great day playing away............ Lin Lane August 13, 2023 at 2:21 PM Thanks a bunch, Paula.

Bill Baker August 13, 2023 at 7:53 AM Enjoy your time in the sun, Lin. Sometimes we just have to let go and get outside and enjoy nature a bit. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Lin Lane August 13, 2023 at 9:43 AM Morning, Bill. I'm not big on laying around in the sun, but these lines are what came to mind for this contest. I'm glad you like them. Thanks.