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Bite Size Contest No. 69    Sponsored by Line Gauthier

August  13, 2023

This morning, soft amber light woke me. Its warmth held me in a lover's embrace, whose fingers gently touched my face. Sunshine danced with such lively esprit, beckoning me to come and play outside. An invitation that could not be denied.

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Date: 8/24/2023 1:24:00 AM
Wonderful poem; congratulations
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Date: 8/23/2023 5:47:00 PM
A beautiful start to a beautiful day, wish I could wake up to that soft amber light! Congratulations on your win in the contest~
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Date: 8/23/2023 6:09:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Michelle. I didn’t know the contest had been judged.
Date: 8/14/2023 12:09:00 PM
I love the personification here Lin..and the great opening line in particular. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 8/23/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thanks, Gary. Sorry I didn’t see your kind comment before now.
Date: 8/13/2023 1:37:00 PM
A wonderful write/invitation/pretty picture. I would enjoy playing outside with you. Have a fun/great day playing away............
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/13/2023 2:21:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Paula.

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