An Invisible Wall Premiere Contest Winner

An invisible wall exists
Between two neighbouring nations
That were once one whole large land

Holocausts of bloody battles
Cold terrorism and bubbled egos
Has cast our irredeemable divide

Generations tilled unitedly
In the undivided country
Whiffing the same gentle air

The ashes of my ancestors 
Mingled with their dust 
None to separate their fragrances

I'm an off shoot whose roots are buried across
A soft puff brings memories of my predecessors
Luring me to their homes but the wall becomes non-invasive


October 23, 2016
For Anthony Slausen



*References to an undivided India.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/30/2016 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win for this touchy poem ... very well deserved ...
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/30/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 10/30/2016 1:15:00 AM
Such a deep write. Congrats on your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/30/2016 2:56:00 AM
Many thanks Moon for your pleasant visit and compliment! Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 8:49:00 PM
Hi Balveen, This is a deep and heartfelt write. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/30/2016 2:55:00 AM
Alexis, thank you dear for congratulating me! Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 7:40:00 PM
An excellent poem Balveen. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! : ) 7
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:20:00 PM
Thanks Connie for your visit and appreciation! Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 3:13:00 PM
Sensational writing, Balveen. Many congrats on your first place win. Lainey
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:22:00 PM
Lainey, it's very kind of you to consider it sensational! Thanks, Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 1:15:00 PM
This was well deserved and a winning poem, Balveen !! Congratulations on your 1st place !!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:24:00 PM
I found yours superb! Thanks Carrie for congratulating me! Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 11:55:00 AM
Great write, congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:24:00 PM
Many thanks Sarita! Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 10:53:00 AM
A very deep and heartfelt poem, Balveen, about your homeland. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:28:00 PM
Yes Sandra, all my elders were born in Undivided India and we've heard stories of warmth between their cultures. Love, Balveen
Date: 10/29/2016 10:05:00 AM
Well done on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thanks Mark!
Date: 10/29/2016 8:52:00 AM
Congrats well-done great words x
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:18:00 PM
One again, thanks Wendy!
Date: 10/29/2016 8:25:00 AM
Great write! Congratulations, Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thanks Kim for the visit and the congratulatory note! Love, Balveen!
Date: 10/23/2016 2:30:00 PM
A very good poem well written and sad x
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Wendy! You have done excellently well in your poem! Love, Wendy!
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