An Interlude Amidst a Dissonance

Amidst a dissonance of human sound, the constant hum of voices as each swarm of people pushed onto the streets, the pound- pound-pounding workers made, which like a storm rained in my ears, my mind‘s eye glimpsed a thing that could not be of this unholy sphere: a woman, nymph-like, on a glassy ring of wintry pond. . . and all that I could hear was breath of wind, the song to which she danced. I marveled as she effortlessly spun. She beckoned me, but then as I advanced, she gracefully collapsed, her dancing done. The blaring of a car’s horn jolted me back into city life’s reality. June 19, 2016 for The Sounds of Day Poetry Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron
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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Congratulations on making the list Andrea. I could have sworn I commented on this but I don't see it. ; )
Flower Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Ah back to the City life's reality...I almost got carried away while reading. Simply beautiful. Congrats on your placement, Andrea. :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 12:57 PM
The imagination can run wild..Congrats on your great win....Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
Grasso Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 10:39 PM
A quiet, gentle read. The rhyme melts into each line beautifully. Congratulations, Andrea....Fran
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 12:45 PM
This is even more dangerous than texting. I liked going along on your fantasy. Love, daver
Hagy Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Beautiful write Andrea!... I see you updated your picture, I like it...great poetic pose!
Walker Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Imagery so well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 7:36 AM
I love the imagery! I also see by the comments congrats are in order.
Daniel Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea:)
Quigley Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Great imagery and contrast!
Merryman Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Another artistic and beautiful sonnet, Andrea! You make it look so easy. **Kim
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest....well penned
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:56 PM
a beautiful sonnet Andrea - oh to block out that sound just for a few moments of calm - beautiful write :-) hugs jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Just to block out the city sounds for just a few fleeting moments is all we ask. Lovely Andrea
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea,
Lawless Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Ah, yes, those 30 second "check outs" that leave us renewed and confused when the horn blows....lovely sonnet Andrea.
Hicks Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 11:10 AM
What a standout title! I loved the images that this sonnet conjured ... "a woman, nymph-like, on a glassy ring of wintry pond ..." ... sure is a stark contrast to the city scene. One is in routine, the other in a daydream. Well written, Andrea.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 11:06 AM
A vivid representation of life in the city excellently composed dear, Andrea. Good luck my dear friend!
Daniel Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 4:13 AM
A different take on the contest:)
Rycroft Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:37 AM
Well thought of excellent written poem very good which put me in that scene x
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